Joey

Wow. You still amaze me with awesome graphics. I really appreciate the hard work put in to these graphics. Keep up the good work!

@Shuji Hey, glad more people are trying out parallax mapping. From what I see so far its pretty well done. I don't know if you have issues but how is your passability on the map? Maybe add some grass to add a little detail. Other than that, all in all it's a good map.

Keep up the good work!

@HumanNinja I guess so. I'll get that fixed.

@RaZzi The map in the video looks fun. I wanna explore it already xD. Anyways I havn't posted a map in here for a long time. I just got back into rpg maker and tried my hand at mapping. Anyways hope it's alright. Just In case your wondering the water is animated.

This looks interesting. I can't wait for the full release.

Well if your up for it why not try using parallax mapping to add detail to your rtp maps.

Thanks for the feedback. It's still in the early stages I am gonna flesh out the world and really define the characters and the story. I want the characters to be likable not generic. If that's the right words for that.

I wonder how we could use this for parallax maps. I'm sure several people have has passability issues with parallax map. The collision boxes might fix some of this.

I am not the greatest writer. I know there is some grammer issues in this. Its just roughly a sketch of what I might wanna do. Everything is subject to change. What I need? -Story feedback (What can I do to make it better) -Possible plot holes addressed. -Character development help/tips -How cliche is my story. And any tips on how I can fix it. Story basically: The world is in the age of exploration. Since 1152 a.d. after the discovery of magical items known as Valser stones which grant the user certain abilities never thought possible. As word spread of these enchanting items, war soon followed. Kingdoms hoping to increase their wealth and power. This war came to be known as the War of Valser. After 100 years of war, the Valser stones were all destroyed or so we thought. The three great kingdoms: Ladnivar, Vilg, and Fornia all possesed at least 3 Valser stones. These Valser abillities were some of the most fearsome to ever exist. Thus these kingdoms were in stalemate and war has henced ceased for now. Our story begins in the NEUTRAL desert town of Hewali. Damian is the son of a inn owner Along with Lucienne ,a treasure hunter he met, they go exploring the desert for unknown wonders.Little did they know that their life would take a turn for better or for worse. On Damien's 17th birthday, the Vilg Empire broke negotiations and siezedcontrol of Desert town of Hewali. Their goal was simple to excavate and discover the Valser stones in the ancient tombs and temples nearby. On Damien's 17th birthday, the Vilg Empire broke negotiations and siezed control of Hewali. Their goal was simple to excavate and discover the Valser stones in the ancient tombs and temples nearby. KEY: CAPITALIZED = ADDED [ ] = REMOVE ( ) = Change Term/Name Possible Plot twists -Temporary Chracter Death (Idea-Cliche) -captured by enemy and totured (I like this) - Betrayed by a women mainly Fay Vercel. (Really like this) Characters: Damien: Son of Alexander Verieh. The blacksmith in Hewali raised him. Loves to explore the unknown. Hates blacksmith job. Sneaks outside and skips work often. Great with a blade. He is known as a trouble maker and often finds himself in trouble. He's kind of an outcast. Lucine: Daughter of King Brevil abanonded along with her mother one fork night. The king deemed them enimies of the state and they've been on the run every since. They currently live in Ladnivar running an inn. Niko: A lone mercenary of the country of Fornia. He joins Damien and company later in the game. His likes to work solo jobs. He uses a gun. He later joins the fornia millitia. (Antagonists) Fay Vercel: King Brevil private assassin, born as a slave and adopted by the king. Her skll with stealth and the dagger are second to none. Anyone who has underestimated her hasn't lived to see another day. King Brevil or Lux Brevil: King of Vilg a country bent of increasing its political and military power throguh the use of Valser Stones. As they steadily gain power the kingdoms of Fornia and Ladnivar are barely keeping them at bay. John Frea -Blacksmith for town of Hewali. He is Damien guardian. He found damien at his front door step one night. He didn't want to take him in but in the end he had no choice. He became quite fond of damien. Sarah Verieh - Mother of Damien was being chased by empire ended up in Hewali decided to leave her child at the blacksmiths door step to to protect his life. No one has seen or heard of her since. Alexander Verieh- Father of Damien and general to the Ladnivar army. during times of war Ladnivar was on the brink of destruction. In order to ensure his families safety he sent his newborn son and wife to Hewali.

Very Useful. Thanks for sharing.

Hey Raizen my text seems to be outside the box slightly anyway to fix that? Example two lines of text and second line spaced too much.

The upadted screenie looks much better. The water looks natural like its meant to be there. Kudos on the good work.