Theweirdomaxim

First of all, thanks! ^^ Now for critics! To Battle: The music is lacking in bass department and some uniquement IMO. It sounds like typical royal guard going to battle sure, but that's it. I don't hear any uniquement, you might want to fix that if possible. Bit By Bit: This one I really like, it sounds like your typical dinner hub place, but for insects, with sounds very unique and enjoyable, heck, I want to play a game with this music as a hub, good job! Byte By Byte: This does sound simular to Bit By Bit to be honest. But something about it does seem, different. I can't put my finger on it, but it feels unique as well, which isn't a bad thing, but I recommen trying different ways to make it sound more different, but not fully. Also this sounds like Robot is a sciencetist! ------------------------------------ Now, here something I was working on in Musescore and (trying to) play this on my piano! Original composition of course, but here you go! Theme: Sumurai, (Final) Boss Music, Japanese Dance.

What can I say, I love it! It sounds like battle of medieval knight fighting you while marching forward. The drums sound like the knight is moving forward, trying to kill you. I love every aspect of it. No complains or critics here! ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Now this is a commission video I did yesterday and wanted to improve my piano skills. It is also a boss fight music (possibly final boss even!), so yeah. Hopefully you will enjoy it! YouTube: SoundCloud:

The music does sound original, and I can see this being use like in phone factory or phone operator office in Earthbound. Also it does sound Earthbound-y, but like Jonnie91 said, I wouldn't listen to this continuously if it was in loop. Still, it was a very interesting concept to use other VSTs like phone instead of piano or violin to say the least, so good job on that part! ---------------------------- WARNING! WARNING! IF YOU KNOW THIS, PREPARE TO CRY!! So, before 6 months of the upload date of this video, I tried to learn the piece, Dango Daikazoku. On December, I published this cover. Till now, it's one of my favorite covers I did! Ladies and Gentlemen, (If you haven't read the warning sign)... prepare to cry. EDIT: I should also mention that this the T.V size version, so yeah.

*Nom* The good old progressing music (aka adding one track at a time) can be done either right, or plain wrong. In this case, it was done perfectly! Honestly, the only thing I can see being unnatural per say, is the drums at around 1:28, but even so, it's a wonderful piece and I love it! ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Now this music is coming to YouTube, but as of you might remember, I actually did this as a chipsounds version, but here is Cave Story Main Theme, in orchestra (and music box) version! Edit: Can someone teach me how to embed Soundcloud music here, I quite don't understand the format.

Kaimen lol, thank you! xD ~ Yeah, 8 bit isn't that complicated, but still kind of challenging. xD These sound really good, great for some classical RPGs. The only thing (for me of course) is lack of energy --- but it's only in the first piece - "Castle Of The Fiends" and "Great Ruler of the Dark" sound more 'full' if you know what I mean. (= All pieces have that "castle'ish" theme and are well done. (= I'm kinda curious - have you considered making more 'energetic' music? =P I'm curious how that would sound like. =3 I actually have to disagree with you there, Rikifive, I think the energy was given just right! Though if I have to be honest, I think you, Kaimen, used a little too many instruments. Don't get me wrong, I like them all! However, I do feel some instrument left off would make it more better. For example, Track 4: Puzzles, I feel like you don't need string(s). But other than that, I like it! ------------------ This is kinda an unfair trade (I think), but I could not criticize things more (I am sorry!). However, I am posting two covers here. Both in chipsounds! The first one is one visual/audio test I did to see wheather it makes the music feel more... alive I guess you could say. So here's the first one, Super Smash Bros. 4 Main Theme: The second one is, let's admit, one of my favorite tracks in video game catalog, or music in general! So here it is, Phoenix Wright: Ace Attorney Cornered 2001: (If prefer SoundCloud): (Yes, I know Cornered was already chipsounded, but still!) And that's it!! Enjoy! ^^

Question, can cover/arrangement music counts as well, or only originals?

2 new critics, 1 new music! LET'S DO THIS! To be honest, that's far from awful, it sounds really awesome. It's catch bouncy, and the notes compliment each other with none (if limited) dissonance. It's a great start, and the tune doesn't get boring, which is brilliant! Great work on that considering that it's your first 8bit song! As a battle theme it is slightly lacking in the power behind it, at the beginning, I'd suggest adding an octave below bass note in the piano. In the main section, I'd suggest adding 2 lower octaves on the main piano section, to give it body, and depth, I'd suggest with your strings if possible, adding some variations in the dynamics, to give it a little more life to the strings, as they feel a little flat and lack life, and are giving a "shotgun effect". Changing the velocities should help slightly. I've got a little WIP that I've been working on recently. it originally was going to be a Café theme, but now I'm beginning to think it's a more VN school theme. Did you get an inspiration from Sims by any chance? Because that EXACTLY sounds like it! To add more details, it sounds like RomCom maid/park cafe, which I actually like it! Though I would suggest turn the tempo down, but not too much. ...Can I just hug you? XD Seriously, that sounds amazing, even if it wasn't 8-bit. And you did this first timer too?! You have a better than I ever had in music in general! Seriously, well done, no nickpicky or anything here! --------------------------- Now this one I made on sunday, and I actually experimented this to get even better on piano, So I just used the bass concept more than the melody (I was playing around the melody if I have to be honest!) So here there are: SoundCloud: If perfer YouTube:

In my opinion, if you compare other instrument with the piano, the piano feels, well, choppy. It does give the creepy atmosphere, not gonna lie there, but, the piano should either be legato, or reverb, or something to remove the choppiness. Either way, the piece was amazing though! ^^ What can I say? It sounds like Castlevania and Samurai are fighting each other! It's just that awesome! I would recommend making the short notes (I believe the harmonica starting at 0:19?) a little louder, but too much, just so that people can listen to it properly as well! Though if you don't want to, or sound not what you want to, then that's fine as well! ------------------------------------ I do apologies about the post without reviewing, I should have read it more properly... >_> Anyway, This is something I am working on as well. It suppose to be a final boss music, though I am not sure if it sounds like one or not. Either way, here is a public Dropbox link for you guys here! (Note: it does not work: https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/61469580/Now%20it's%20Personal%20test%202.mp3 )

Sorry I was away for a while, tried to make a music decent ^^''.... anyway, here's mine! Hey Aliens (Let's Dance!) - Friends (Question Mark) (Original // Maxim Suvedi) EDIT: I will help you guys as well! I just wanted to start off with my music!

Hello Connectors! My name is Theweirdomaxim aka Maxim Suvedi, And I am a pianist in my YouTube channel... well, Theweirdomaxim! The reason I join this forum is because, well, if I have to be blunt to myself, I am not that good as a composer; In fact, most of my music sounds the same according to many people. I want to improve myslef, destroy all the walls I can, problem is that I reached to the point that even I cannot see how to defeat the limit wall anymore, and none of my real life friends are composers, so hence I joined here! I am looking forward to help (if I can) and get critizied as much as I can! If you are intrested on my music (and I hope this is not breaking the rules >_>), Here is my latest music if intrested. One last thing before I end this post, I want to be the greatets pianist in the world! And then the universe! Anyway see you later! ^^ BAI BAI!