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  1. Dear_Elise

    Mouse System

    Hello Jet, hopefully you will see this message, I'd like to report an issue and I'd be so grateful if you could fix somehow. When I put a "mouse text" command in an event, the text is display over pictures when I make a picture command. Isn't there a possibility to change the Z value so that when I make a picture command, the player cannot see the text on top of the picture if they hover their mouse over it ? Also, another little issue is that, when you double click on an event, it repeats itself twice. What could that be ? Thank yo uvery much Jet !
  2. Dear_Elise

    Mouse System

    Hello Jet, hopefully you will see this message, I'd like to report an issue and I'd be so grateful if you could fix somehow. When I put a "mouse text" command in an event, the text is display over pictures when I make a picture command. Isn't there a possibility to change the Z value so that when I make a picture command, the player cannot see the text on top of the picture if they hover their mouse over it ? Thank yo uvery much Jet !
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  4. Well obviously the names will be in romaji but some of the files and on some parts of the game, it will also contain kanji to show the meaning of their names. But I see your point, thank you.
  5. Hey ! So it's just like the title says, in a visual novel game which contains anime-like graphics, would you rather see characters with japanese names or names coming from different countries ? I'm struggling between these two choices ! Knowing that the cast of characters is diversified (like some characters are blond, some dark-skinned, some colorful-haired etc...) is it better to give more diversity by giving names coming from different countries (like egyptian, french, british, russian and a few japanese names) or is it better to give exclusively japanese names to the characters so that it will fit better the anime-like design? Thank youuu~
  6. Really interesting reply ! But maybe I could clarify for you so you could give me a clear opinion ? I want the game to be "marketed" in whichever country, I want everyone to be able to play it (with people translating it in their own language if needed). Also the game does not happen in any specific country. Next, the characters are coming from an organization spreading world-widely, with members coming from many different countries. Now it's also on the aesthetic that I am asking this, like, you know ? Seeing the list of characters coming from the game, with all the names including, is it more intriguing somehow to see exotic names or japanese-only names ? On a hand, I feel like japanese names are interesting because you can easily search for the meanings of the kanjis (and it's exotic for non-japanese people, and japanese people can more easily figure out the meaning of the names), and on the other hand, it's interesting to have characters with different cultures and origins. What do you think dear Traverse ?
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    Boop ! Nobody :< ?
  8. Dear_Elise

    Turn into your Alter-Ego !

    The world is tedious and monotonous . People have black or brown or blond hair . Blue or brown or green eyes . Let's be colorful and creative ! *magical girl transformation* I wish to see your alter egos ! What do they look like ? What are their name and their personality ? Shall we introduce ourselves to each other !
  9. Greetings lost wanderer ! Soooo , for the past weeks , I have spent time drawing a few arts in order to develop my skills but then a major blockup came across my path , I am unable what art style to use . So the questions are : - Is it ok to have multiple art style instead of just one? I feels like , sometimes , an art style can be specific to one artist and can even portray their signature , but I cannot be satisfied with only one art style ! Therefore , would it be ok this way ? - Among those five drawings-drafts ( I actually have a dozen other art styles but I only used four of them with my graphic tab so far .) which one do you actually prefer ? First artstyle is almost chibi-like with minor shading but a slightly wider color palette for the hair . Its sketchy and colors are solid. Unlike other artstyles , legs are not very realistic and goes from thinner by the thighs to thicker by the feet : Second artstyle (I have already published on another topic , I do know) , the artstyle is not chibi-like but not too realistic either . It's simplistic but has a bit of details . Proportions are more anime-like with bigger eyes , bigger head , droopy shoulders , very round features and structure . It has shading and a bit of lighting for the hair. The "outer" outlines are black but the "inner" outlines are lighter and the color is closer to the filling : Third artstyle is a closer aspect of the anime style but still in a cuter art style . There are a bit more details , minor lighting for the hair and shading . The "outer" outlines are black but the "inner" outlines are lighter and the color is closer to the filling : Fourth artstyle is a more realistic in proportions . It has less lighting effect but has a more detailed shadowing ( I guess ) and more details . The outlines and the shading are sometimes a bit smoothed down on the ends . The "inner" and "outer" oulines are both black : Fifth artstyle is quite similar to the third one but with a cuter aspect and the head is even bigger than the body . It has more shading ( there is one shading for the part that is facing the light , and a shading for the part that is hidden from the light source.) It has a bit of details but it is mostly for the eyes and the patterned areas . The "outer" outlines are black but the "inner" outlines are lighter and the color is closer to the filling : Thank you very much for taking your time to read this post . It is greatly appreaciated !
  10. Dear_Elise

    Stitched

    What a stunning albeit pretty gloomy artstyle ! This seems interesting but I highly think you should , maybe , consider making your own material for the map . It would be a lot more immersive and a tad more fitting to your own little world !
  11. Dear_Elise

    Finding own art style . Feedback ? (once again)

    No , no . I mean , globally . Can you have several artstyles globally , and not only for one single game . Obviously , this would look inconsistent haha .
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    Turn into your Alter-Ego !

    Why would you even want to shape shift into a human ? Being a fairy is already a marvelous thing on its own! Being a mere human is a little mundane most of the time , but well !.. Keep being your fairy self .
  13. You and I , will go on a adventure . You and I , will aim for a promising future .

    1. lonequeso
    2. Kayzee

      Kayzee

      Why the future tense? Isn't that what we should already be doing? :3

  14. Dear_Elise

    Is this cute ?

    Last morning , I felt a little bored albeit slothful , so I decided to draw something cute and simple . What do you think about it ? Is this cute or even nice ? I called it "Phantoms And A Wandering Girl" , with the girl named "Kuri Madoka" [æ —ãƒžãƒ‰ã‚«] the two little ghost on the top being "Pupa & Pope" [プパーãƒãƒš], the offbeat three-eyed rabbit being " Betago" [ベタゴ] , the little mushroom "Kinokio" [木ノキオ] , the fluffy-looking bunny "Coco" [ココ] , the flame wraith "Hatsuka" [髪ç«] and the weird poisonous-looking sheep , "Muffix" [モフィックス] .
  15. Here's my new project : Prism+ Virus ã€ãƒ—リズム+ ウイルス】 (The "+" isn't pronounced and is just inserted for aestheticism.) Prism+ Virus will be a survival , sci-fi visual novel . Synopsis : In this present time , anyone who is brought to life has to be implanted with a "Prism" in a region nearby the brain . This governmental device is meant to oversee criminality , prevent any cardiac or celebral disease , to be a replacement for ID cards , and can even be used as an internal phone , web browser and social network access point . The Prism's usages are known to be tremendous and supposedly benefits to everyone's welfare . However , in the case of a group of 13 persons , the Prism becomes an ominous threat . As they wake up with suppressed memories , they find themselves being kept captive in a weird , dreary-looking place that seems utterly unfamiliar . As bewilderment arises , they are told by an offbeat , cubic-looking host , named "Rippoume" , that among them is an infiltrating traitor who will cause world-wide havoc . Because of that , every 3 days , the most suspicious-looking person of the group will see their Prism being mind-hacked by "Rippoume" thus causing an instant demise . As an alternative , they will be also allowed to kill who they expect to be the traitor . This bloody mayhem will then keep on until that the traitor is obliterated , even if the entire group has to be sacrificed . Why were they specifically chosen ? What is this place ? Is there truly a traitor ? And who are the individuals behind this mischievous plan ? "Who is the traitor ?" The 13 characters . Is there truly a traitor among them ? But then , who ? Now what I would like to know is , does this sound like a promising story , knowing that the storyline has been very shortened to give a sypnosis . Does the title sounds appealing to you ? I shall , later on , create a full page with all the characters shown along side with their informations , some sprites , some screenshots of the maps and several other informations as such . (Here you can find one only map for exemple .)
  16. I completely agree ! And thank you once again Lonequeso ! I will do my best to make the execution has pleasant and twisted as possible so that people will be able to enjoy my game !
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    Is this cute ?

    Thank you so much my dears , you all are extremely heartwarming ! And I cannot seriously believe how many metaphorical details you have managed to catch accurately ! I am tremendously merry to see that all of you are indeed correct regarding this drawing . Thank youuuuuu~
  18. May I sigh as well ? How can you tell the entier storyline is silly when you've only red the synopsis ? If you might not know already , the government is already contantly tracking everyone and anyone's moves , why wouldn't it implant "mind chips" , as you call it , to further extend its control over the people ? It might be nothing more than a sci-fi story but how can you theorize that such an occurrence might not happen in our own genuine future ? And concerning the potential hacker , once again , YOU DON'T EVEN REMOTELY KNOW A BIT OF THE STORYLINE YET ! Of course the government wouldn't create a device that would easily get hacked by any random individual . It all lies in the storyline . Don't make me spoil it . And the fact that I know why such a thing could happen in a sci-fi story such as mine makes me feel a bit disdainful regarding your comment . I just think that your personal statement , whether it is generally subjective or not , is somewhat rude toward my work . A brainwashing and overly-controlling government already exists , so I really cannot understand why you think of my idea as so "silly" . But oh well , I am sorry to be part of this stupid human kind , however now , I do wonder what kind are you coming from ? Oh yes , pardon me edgy-lord ! You are human yourself, so cease trying to act so condescending please . People tend not to like that , myself including . Overall when I nicely ask for decent feedbacks . Now thank you for your sullen feedback , i didn't mean to start an argument but try to be a little nicer and wiser next time . If you intend to "enter" one of my topic , please , leave your wrath outside , and bring it back with you once you are planning to leave . Have a nice day nonetheless .
  19. Everything has been corrected . Thanks again Traverse , I feel ashamed for all the illogical mistakes I have made , but ultimately , I had the opportunity to improve my skills .
  20. Dear_Elise

    Is this cute ?

    I could give a hundred likes for this answer Lonequeso !
  21. The game will be mostly text ,but you will be able to interact with the characters in order to know their backstory . Doing so will give the player extras if correctly done . They will be also some gameplay sessions . Although they will be short , I sincerely hope their rareness will make them more fun . And I am really trying to give the story as much plot twists as possible to "mind rape" (not to say "mind f***") the player . By the same way , I tried to use voice acting to make the game more immersive , but also spent a lot of time trying to find proper BGM in order to make the player feel what the characters will feel themselves . And just likst I said to Traverse , I will make my best to use a proper english and I might also consider trying to find someone to check after me . Thank you as always Lonequeso ! I will surely make a page that will provide a lot more informations concerning my game . Such as backgrounds , the characters (along side with their personal infos) , CG's , facesets and etc ... Beside , I am very grateful to hear that you seem to enjoy my idea ! It makes me very motivated ! The title doesn't sound good to you ? Well ... I guess not everyone will like it after all , haha ... And believe it or not , but I made it right for you because you haunt my dreams ! (herp)
  22. I am tremendously grateful ! I must say , I am a little proud to see that most of my mistakes are due to an "overthinking syndrome" and due to my lack of diligence , whereas in the end , I could've easily fixed most of it . But I do believe I have hours of work to complete if I wish to master your language . I don't think what I write is that painful to the eyes buuuuut ... It is surely not pleasant either . Thank you again Traverse , I will do my best and hopefully , I will find someone to re-check my game .
  23. Well , I used to be proud of my english but it seems like I am not that proficient after all . Would you mind to tell me the mistakes I have done , so that I don't have to repeat them over again .
  24. And just like it is written : "knowing that the storyline has been very shortened to give a sypnosis ." (furthermore , I'm bad at making resumes.) Next , just like it is also said : " they are told by an offbeat , cubic-looking host , named Rippoume , that among them is an infiltrated traitor who will cause a world-wide havoc . For that , every 3 days , the most suspicious-looking person of the group will see their Prism being mind-hacked by Rippou-me thus causing an instant demise [...] .This bloody mayhem will then keep on until that the traitor is obliterated , and even though if the entier group has to be sacrificed ." It's pretty obvious that it does so to get rid of a traitor that might cause them wrong . But as explained the traitor is infiltrated thus unrecognizable . "And why not wait until you know who the traitor is" , you ask ? It's pretty evident no ? Imagine yourself as someone who raises sheeps , but you are told that a wolf is after you to eat you and your sheeps , but the issue is that this wolf is perfectly disguised as a sheep , obviously , due to your survival instinct , you are going to sacrifice any suspicious looking sheep until finally discovering the wolf disguised as a sheep . It is the same case in this game , Rippoume is threatened by the traitor who infiltrated this group and so , it will kill any suspicious looking person until finally killing the traitor . I think your feedback is impulsive and stupid , it doesn't even look like you tried to think , understand or even figure out the mechanism or even the storyline . I even wonder if you properly red it . And I feel it is very uncalled-for to call my characters "impulsive and stupid" although that none of them were completely revealed . Thank you anyway (I guess.)
  25. Greetings dear utopic people . I was wondering something , what do you think about time-limited games ? Just like the title says indeed . Like , you have a story line , and during brief moments you have a certain amount of time to find specific objects and once the time is up , you are led to different endings depending on the items you had enough time to find . ( Like a bad ending , a true ending and a good ending .) Let's say you have to find a rose , a fruit and a cat . If you had enough time to find a rose and a cat , you have a good ending . If you had enough time to find a rose and a fruit , you have ending number one . If you had enough time to find only the cat , you have a bad ending . And etc ... So . What are your thoughts ?
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