Kamoninfernape

Yo I remember you. its been a long time since ive posted on these forums so you probably dont remember me. this post might jog your memory. thanks for the help. since im kinda on a deadline ill just use the default on and work on a different design in my offtime

So im having a bit of trouble finding resources to do a cave map. The idea for the cave is that due to natural causes has opened at the back end of a Mountain forest. the idea im trying to go for is a large open cave with bridges and walkways over a few bodies of water. can anyone help me find some tile set or parallax resources?

Id like to try to help though ive never done voice acting before. If you have other male roles you need done id like to try out.

Over the years I've had many ideas for games ranging from mechanics to story plot. This is one of the few that actually makes sense. I'm just going to give a summary of what I have so far. I haven't though of a name for the main character but you will be able to name them ( think link from the legend of Zelda) This is the story of the King of destruction aka The Ruin King. The story begins in the forest village Treeton and you wake up in your house on your first say as a member of the Treeton guild ( if you want an example of what the guild does think of the guild from Pokemon mystery dungeon explores of a time). After doing your starter missions ( talk to everyone in the village deliver items etc.) you are given your first official mission to go into the apex forest and clear out the apex forest dungeon ( haven't thought of a good name for it) because something in the forest is causing the monsters to become more hostile than usual. You are assigned a partner by the name of Christie and you two are to find out what the problem is and bring back anything unusual that you find. After clearing out the dungeon you and your partner find a mysterious emblem that looks like it has the royal symbol on it is highly reactive to you and you hear a voice coming from it. You and Christie take it back to the guild and they aren't able to identify it and you are tasked with taking It too the Royal family. This is where you meet your second partner Queen Ketalia and she says she's seen it in a book before and it the mark of the Ruin King and it reacts to whom ever is destined to be the next King of destruction. Wow that toke a while to type because I'm on an iPad right now. I'll answer any individual questions such as game mechanics and other stuff. What do you think so far?

Well its a good thing i didnt mention the second main character. The orginal twist was the title is usually reborn onto a male but this time its a female. i got the inspiration from FE:awakening with the Marth/lucina thing

I like the sound of Ruinious Majesty, Ruinous King also works because it also fits the fact that its mostly a title that is more feared than respected ( i try to put some thought into things lol) so calling them majesty would be kinda out of character. I really appreciate the suggestions they really help especially when making a game like this. if you would like to hear what i have so far or have any suggestions let me know

Sorry for the late response i didn't receive a notification so I didn't know. As for the name I wanted to go for something that goes the point across but didn't sound generic like "king of destruction" or something. I'm also working on a better plot to tie that in so I'll have the rough draft for that soon.

Are there any story features that you find appealing or any suggestions on how to structure this story? im honestly kinda lost on how to do this because it keeps leading back to the same generic story.

So what im getting is generally mixed reviews. ill just cover this now. Im mostly working on story right now because a game thats all battling and now story is basically grind until you're bored. as for art and music im mostly using the stock tiles and music and some npc characters so i can get a decent demo finished and fix minor details later. The player caring about the characters is a tough one so i was going for something that hits close to home but not generic sad backstory. on to the more technical side i was thinking about 4-5 main party members. as for anything else really ive gotten about half of a "demo" done so its basically a demo for the demo. Why im making this game? i just want to be able to creat something that can bring happiness and be able to say that something i created or helped create made someone happy. Im going to continue to work hard and focus on the story for right now. thank you for your kind feed back.

Hello my name is Kamon and I'm semi-new to VXace ( I've had a few months to play with it but I'm still learning.) and I look forward to being par of the community. I already have a game idea in the works so I hope you all enjoy it when I post the concept.

I would be lying if i said i didnt feel the same. but thats the reason for posting here. as for something to shake it up ive got nothing so i posted here to see opinions if what i have so far is a good start but it looks like its back to the drawing board. Thanks for your opinion it really helped. ill update this when i have a new idea but im keep the overall concept.

Its going to be told as an overall story but told in chapters so for example this would be chapter 1.

Ive posted my concept in the theory and develpment section if you wanna read