Ignasis

I noticed in the beginning you put I and Oslo, it should be Oslo and I. From what I played of it you do, I admit grudgingly, have a decent story. I say that because IMO stories based off, or extremely similar to other stories aren't that great. I lost interest after wandering aimlessly through the heart of the volcano for about 5 min. your maps could use a little direction. In the map before that, you have a lot of unused space, such as islands with nothing on them.. If your going to put a place like that give the player a reward no matter how small for wandering off the beaten path, since wandering around means more random encounters.

Story sounds great, Screens look good. This will definitely be a project I follow.

I was trying to drag you down lol just give helpful criticism. Honestly I've only watched the Eragon movie which IMO was horrendous. As with most things the first impression is the most important, so I would take Syrus' advice and work on those screens, I've worked with him on some stuff he does good work.

No offense intended but the mapping could use a bit of work. Some of your cliffs blend in a bit too much, and the carpeting in that library or office doesn't look right with the borders around the bookshelves. The story itself sounds similar to the book Eragon.

I started playing the demo I noticed some minor issues.. like after talking to ichor and opening the cave door you can go over to ichor and walk right over him.. lol So, far its pretty sweet.

I'm trying to play your demo but I keep getting an error saying it can't find graphic/system/balloon so I don't know whats goin on.. other than I'm missing that image.

I like the tilesets and the chests those are nicely done, but some of the Bio stuff looks a little cartoony.

Hey do you think you could make a pose for me... it would only be a slight alteration to some you already have... I have the sprite if you could do it. I'm making a vampire game and the pose you have of the two embracing or kissing would be the one I need.