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Screenshot Critique Thread Welcome to the Official Screenshot Thread. Here you can post any screenshots related to maps, battles, title pages, anything in-game related you believe needs advice. Also, to ensure that you'll get the correct feedback include information regarding what the screenshot is about. Rules: You must leave critique on ANY previous screenshot. It DOES NOT have to be the last one you see. If you have already left feedback on a previous post, but then post your own image to critique. You are STILL required to give feedback to a DIFFERENT screenshot. (I cannot stress this enough ~kayden997) This is simply due to respect for other developers. It's not exactly hard to leave some advice on a previous post. It is common courtesy. We are all here to help each other, as is the point of this thread. Basically, to avoid any problems. just leave Critique on a screenshot in the SAME post as your thread. If you want to leave additional Feedback, without screenshots that is brilliant, however you are STILL required to post more if you post a different screenshot. No random Chit-Chat. A Screenshot isn't required but discussions between two members should be done via PM Spoiler Large Images. Wait 30 posts until you repost the same Screenshot. Do not double post. If no one has replied edit your current post and replace the screenshot All other Global Rules Apply If you have any other questions then feel free to PM @Jonnie91 or @kayden997 So I guess I'll go first: This is a screenshot from mine and Shaddows second game Lullaby. This is a Decision system. The mapping is only a placeholder. It will NOT look like that....Any feedback? Edit 7/2/13: If you have a series of screenshots you would like critiqued at once (3 or more screenshots), you may create your own topic in this forum and post them there instead of posting them to this thread. If you have less than 3 screenshots ready to be critiqued, then you would continue to use this thread.

Hello Guys! This is a game I've been working on during the last days, it's a scifi JRPG with Mechs. The story takes place in 2439, after a great catastrophe nations try to reorganize themselves and continue fighting for power, trying to secure the last resources on Earth. These images shows the first work I've done: Fighting System Visual Novel System (with two characters - Roland, Jorge- and mechs) (NEO) France's Flag The World in 2439 Let me know your opinion about it

Bobbi Ficus Elder Tree Patrol Leader Mariang Makiling I know that the Bobbi Ficus normal pose needs some cleaning up.

After nearly two weeks straight of parallax mapping, I've finally made some serious progress in terms of the demo's maps and backgrounds. Working on the second to last area now (I get them finished at a rate of about 2 every 3 days). Hope everyone will take a glance at the Facebook page too, support and likes are hugely appreciated! The screenshots are of Verdamm's Outskirts region.

I have been dabbling in parallax mapping a bit to get a feel for mapping potential. I came up with a few versions of a particular map and I haven't decided on what kind of mapping style I should go with. I attached a few interior maps as well and I have to say I really like those and was thinking of going with some parallax on those akin to the brighter colored parallaxed town map. Should I stick with the basics until after I have finished my first project or go midway like in the first parrallaxed map? I'm pretty sure I won't try advanced stuff like I did with the puke map. Town Maps: I really like the way the swamp town came out in all the screenshots Interior maps:

Here are some screenshots from an educational game, I am working on.

Hello everyone , finally i finish my first 2 parallax mapping I really enjoy mapping things on my way .. it took me 2 days and each day 6 hour to learn and finish them anyway, here the sample pic of what i done so far. I really need your feedback and advices for parallax maps .. and same tutorial of water parallax if any thanks in advance

Hello everyone! Today, I need some feedback about one of the first parallax mapping I made (it may look bad, because it's really hard to make this one). I also need some suggestions to improve it.

I'd appreciate any feedback I can get on these screenshots. I finished the walkway element today and added it in, but I've got a nagging sense that something about it doesn't look quite right. Having stared at it for many hours already as I was designing it, it's now become impossible for me to register details. If anyone can identify what may be the source of said nagging sense, I'd love to hear your thoughts. Tah, El