FenrirWolferion 9 Posted March 27, 2013 (edited) i find none for dragon Faceset then i try to do 1. And here is my results . Please give me a feedback about it andwhat should i do in my next work, i wanna be a better artist Edited : Also i got an anthro fox faceset though i use someone work named BunnycOre on FA as refference and She is one of my Character on my project, her name is Serena And here is my original work, my self made faceset character This is one of my Character on my project, his name is Wolferion This is one of my Character on my project, his name is Adam. Originaly he is my friend's fursona . Note: for my wolf, i dont intend to make it Public share Edited April 17, 2013 by FenrirWolferion 2 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
magic2345 252 Posted March 27, 2013 Wow, that is actually pretty awesome work! Didn't know dragons could have so much emotions I really can't think of any critiques because I'm pretty sure people will find use for this. Btw, that second face, is he grinning or is that just his normal face? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Darkanine 116 Posted March 27, 2013 I like it I'm actually using a custom dragon battler that looks just like this :3 my only issue with it is that the shadow effect is a little off. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
FenrirWolferion 9 Posted March 27, 2013 (edited) Wow, that is actually pretty awesome work! Didn't know dragons could have so much emotions I really can't think of any critiques because I'm pretty sure people will find use for this. Btw, that second face, is he grinning or is that just his normal face? On second face yes he is grinning I like it I'm actually using a custom dragon battler that looks just like this :3 my only issue with it is that the shadow effect is a little off. thanks a lot , i will try not too mess the shadow effect even for a bit next time Edited March 27, 2013 by FenrirWolferion Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Syphix 1 Posted March 27, 2013 You should probably mention that this was an edit, not original like you were implying.... If you want to see it, it's at the bottom of this page. Still not a bad edit, though. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
FenrirWolferion 9 Posted March 27, 2013 You should probably mention that this was an edit, not original like you were implying.... If you want to see it, it's at the bottom of this page. Still not a bad edit, though. yep it is an edit i found the base from granny's character list but no faceset in there, i still cant do 1 without template or editing yet. I will post my own Character Faceset next time Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
FenrirWolferion 9 Posted April 10, 2013 Great work! Thanks a lot 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ironcubey 1 Posted April 15, 2013 Regarding the original work, I actually like your Anthro characters design quite a lot. He looks threatening and imposing but his eyes and emotions also make him look gentle. One thing I noticed about the way you drew him was that his edges weren't really too prominent, thus it was kinda hard to get a good look at him and all his features. If I were to make a suggestion, It'd be to focus more on the edges, and possibly crop out part of the ears so that his face will stick out more. (Since the facial features are what should be getting the attention) As for his expressions, I think his emotions get across very well. I would reccommend giving a bit more focus into the eye. It seemed like you were a bit hesitant on editting it in any way unless it involved closing it completely. The angry face and the crying face are actually pretty good examples of what I mean. While he does look angry, the eyes look the same as in each of the other face sets, making it look more natural if anything. For the crying, it'd probably be good to have the eye squint a bit more at the bottom. This is also kind of a nitpick, but I'd reccomend making the tear a more clear color. While it's true that they are often depicted in a shade of blue. They're more clear and reflective if anything. Overall, while I think you have parts you can improve on, I think you should be proud about what you've accomplished. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
FenrirWolferion 9 Posted April 17, 2013 Regarding the original work, I actually like your Anthro characters design quite a lot. He looks threatening and imposing but his eyes and emotions also make him look gentle. One thing I noticed about the way you drew him was that his edges weren't really too prominent, thus it was kinda hard to get a good look at him and all his features. If I were to make a suggestion, It'd be to focus more on the edges, and possibly crop out part of the ears so that his face will stick out more. (Since the facial features are what should be getting the attention) As for his expressions, I think his emotions get across very well. I would reccommend giving a bit more focus into the eye. It seemed like you were a bit hesitant on editting it in any way unless it involved closing it completely. The angry face and the crying face are actually pretty good examples of what I mean. While he does look angry, the eyes look the same as in each of the other face sets, making it look more natural if anything. For the crying, it'd probably be good to have the eye squint a bit more at the bottom. This is also kind of a nitpick, but I'd reccomend making the tear a more clear color. While it's true that they are often depicted in a shade of blue. They're more clear and reflective if anything. Overall, while I think you have parts you can improve on, I think you should be proud about what you've accomplished. Thanks so much for ur opinion, and i guess you are right... i must concern more about face especialy face Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
