PLEASE CLOSE!

[Leo-Rose 15]

PLEASE CLOSE!

THIS GAME IS DELETED FROM MY COMPUTER!

Edited April 13, 2013 by Leo-Aka

[+ Dark Influence 251]

I'm using those exact same resources for my futuristic setting, two things I'd like to point out though.

1. It would be better to use more Formal typing to help players fully understand what they're reading, your spelling is fine so don't worry about that just type every letter for every word, a little less Formal typing is fine - Just don't overdo it.
2. Change all and any lower case i's to upper case I's when characters are referring to themselves.

Other than that it's all good, keep going and achieve success Leo.

[Leo-Rose 15]

Ok. :/