Jiggyjiggy 1 Posted November 29, 2013 Hello! I just started on my second game >.< I will be posting some screenshots of my maps (of course haha) I am hoping that you will give comments that will help me in improving my maps, how can I improve it, and so forth. Here it goes! I will give you pics of how the map looks like and how it looks like during gameplay Maps The hometown How it looks during gameplay The inside of the church Inside of a house The Forest The Cave ;D Sorry for the long post and my bad english haha. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tsarmina 2,612 Posted November 29, 2013 Ooh, these are really nice ;3 The inside of the house looks a little bare...especially in that middle part. I would also shift-click map those carpets to make them more...uh...believable? Same with the church--shift-click that carpet in the center. In the forest--which is also really nice--the only qualm is that the tree inconsistency can be a little jarring. Especially with all the different colors--you have tall VX trees, vivid Mack trees that are much smaller than the VX trees, and RTP clumped trees that are paler in color and also quite small. The cave is hands-down my fave (Hey, I recognize that sprite!) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Jiggyjiggy 1 Posted November 30, 2013 Thank you for your feedback! come to think of it, the forest bugs me a little haha. I will follow what you just said. ;D hehe I'm glad that you recognize the sprite Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tsarmina 2,612 Posted November 30, 2013 I have that sprite in my files...too bad I don't remember where it came from XD (I should really keep track of who I get my individual resources from, rather than putting them all in a list...) Oh! And did I mention that I really like your light effects ^-^ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Jiggyjiggy 1 Posted December 1, 2013 (edited) Just to let you know, I just generated the sprite >.< haha. ohh and thanks! glad you liked the light effects :3 Edited December 1, 2013 by Jiggyjiggy Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tsarmina 2,612 Posted December 1, 2013 ...O_o Wowz. Obviously I haven't been spending enough time looking at sprites then...disregard all my sprite comments from now on...=.=" Anyway. Just out of curiosity, where did you get the Cave tiles from? (Did you buy them? 'Cause I haven't seen those around ) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Raindeerman 13 Posted December 2, 2013 I think Hanzo released some tiles like that a while back from his Valkyrie Stories game here is a link! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Jiggyjiggy 1 Posted December 2, 2013 Yep, I got it from Hanzo Kimura hehe. I immediately fell in love with the tileset the moment i set my eyes on it XD Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
dhofari9 2 Posted December 2, 2013 (edited) man your maps is great .. it's make me so Enthusiastic to create map like it I have only one notice on the first map of you ( the home town) i think the Direction of Sunlight in game is different from the direction of the shadow .. It seems that the light came from the right and shade reversed from left .. or maybe a feel that way when i see the pic. I do not know frankly, just wanted to remind you that it. Edited December 2, 2013 by dhofari9 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tsarmina 2,612 Posted December 2, 2013 Oh gee XD The light/shadow mix dhofari9 pointed out...haha, I just noticed! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Jiggyjiggy 1 Posted December 3, 2013 man your maps is great .. it's make me so Enthusiastic to create map like it I have only one notice on the first map of you ( the home town) i think the Direction of Sunlight in game is different from the direction of the shadow .. It seems that the light came from the right and shade reversed from left .. or maybe a feel that way when i see the pic. I do not know frankly, just wanted to remind you that it. Ohh I just noticed haha. thanks for pointing it out XD it would have been a disaster >.< hehe Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aegal 0 Posted December 31, 2013 (edited) Nvm. Edited January 2, 2014 by Aegal Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
