Walkways I Made

[Elder71 14]

I'd appreciate any feedback I can get on these screenshots.

 

I finished the walkway element today and added it in, but I've got a nagging sense that something about it doesn't look quite right. Having stared at it for many hours already as I was designing it, it's now become impossible for me to register details.

 

If anyone can identify what may be the source of said nagging sense, I'd love to hear your thoughts.

 

Tah,

 

El

 

 

 

[+ Brackev 66]

Railing of that kind may not always be perfectly aligned with each other. But they generally are not that far off or irregular as in your pics. The bottom rails do not have enough contrast with the floor plating, try making the floors a little darker or remove the rails on the camera side. Other than that it looks good, I love the fans in the background.

[Elder71 14]

Thanks for the tip, I'm working on the railings as we speak. I'll post the update, if you wouldn't mind having a look?

[+ Brackev 66]

No problem. I'll watch for the update.