critique Map Name Logo Critique?

[Mysticaler 5]

So I decided to make a Map name logo for an Island in my game. I just thought I'd upload it for people to share their thoughts and opinions.
I'll accept any form of constructive criticism!  

I think i did a pretty good job and I hope you all like it!

 

 

 

[magic2345 252]

Wow, that's actually very nicely done! I hope you saved it in layers tho.

[Mysticaler 5]

Thank you!

 

I did save it in layers just in case I wanted to change something later

[ZestyCactus 48]

This is really nice Mysticaler.

I'd suggest looking at the Kingdom Hearts, World entry screens - as they have similar Map Name logos (albeit a bit less dark).

Another good example is Final Fantasy IX, as they have it for new places you haven't visited.

Ice Cavern, is one such example.

[Mysticaler 5]

Thank you Pixel
The reason I'm adding these to my game is actually because of the artworks in kingdom hearts

[TheHarmp 155]

Hurray for Kingdom Hearts/ Final Fantasy 9 and now Mysticaler!

[Mysticaler 5]

Thanks guys
It's nice to know people actually like my work

[Skysagi 219]

Even if you know it, I must say :3 that logo was really really nice.

[Mysticaler 5]

Even if you know it, I must say :3 that logo was really really nice.

Thank you ZoroarX

[Quasi 54]

That's really good, it gives me a feeling the map is like a rain forest or something though.  Not sure if that is what the map is.  But the Green+ leafs give a forest feel and the blue-ish haze/cloudy makes makes me think it'd be gloomy or raining.  Only thing I'd suggest is move the underline layer over that blue cloudy layer.  That texture on it looks a bit weird too me but maybe it's just because of the current size.

[CrimsonKunoichi 5]

I love your logo, it looks like your tale is going to be deep and dark and a struggle. I like it alot

[Elder71 14]

Personally, I'd suggest adding an outline to the foreground text to help it stand out with a bit of contrast to the background.

[Oasiris 12]

Wow, the logo is quite well done. Did you hand draw the leaves? They look good.

 

If you're hoping to elevate this to a legendary quality, I would take a look at sharpening the pattern of the leaves and underline. There's an inconsistency of sharpness in the graphics used in this logo.

 

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I'd suggest looking at the Kingdom Hearts, World entry screens - as they have similar Map Name logos (albeit a bit less dark).

Another good example is Final Fantasy IX, as they have it for new places you haven't visited.

I wholeheartedly agree with this advice. Pay some attention to these logos' emnating quality and unique themes.

 

Comparing and contrasting your logo and Destiny Islands:

 

 

 

 

From looking at the Waga Island logo, I cannot immediately identify what type of area it is going to be. It's hard to imagine an island without the blue skies and blue waters that are planted in all of our heads. There is only one color on your logo, and that is a bit of a dull, unsaturated green; not bright, but not quite dark either.

 

You can improve this logo by adding touches that will make it more representing of your island. If it gives off a pleasant vibe, go for something looking more like the Destiny Islands logo. If it's foresty with a local lumberjack, put a log house, darker colors, and some trees.

 

Personally, looking at the Destiny Islands logo immediately reminds me of the carefree scenes of Sora, Kairi, and Riku, and I can begin to hear the BGM playing in my head. Hopefully my advice will elevate your logo's quality to that degree.

Edited February 24, 2014 by Oasiris