+ Omega Zero 48 Posted April 17, 2014 Er... first time posting here, and reading the rules, I feel this might work. I have some maps from MCW I was hoping to gather some feedback on... >_< All three are from the hub area of Mecha Cross War -Eternal Flames-, Providence Cluster. Restaurant in The Crimson Heart's shopping district. The Lobby of the Seat of Providence A section in one of Six Clinics throughout Providence Cluster What do you guys think of these? 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
The Dragon God 34 Posted April 17, 2014 Looks really good!! ^^ 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tsarmina 2,612 Posted April 17, 2014 Ooh, me likey. The clinic one reminds me of an optical illusion sort of thing with the tiles and the beds and the crosses--don't know if you were going for that. (If you were, it's perfection~) 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Cecillia 652 Posted April 17, 2014 I like the simplicity of the maps and the use of the tilesets. Glad to see my clinic tilesets are being used! Thank you very much! The only thing that makes me a bit confused though is the clinic itself. Usually clinics are meant to be white and pleasant to the eyes of the patients, so I'd cut down the red/white floor tiles and probably keep it white in some areas. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
+ Omega Zero 48 Posted April 18, 2014 Thanks for the feedback you guys. Tsarmina: No, I wasn't actually. o.o Cecillia: Thanks for that. XD I'll fix it shortly. And well... one final map I have together. >_< I'm feeling pretty confident thanks to the feedback, but one other map i'm nervous about... one of three courtrooms in the Seat of Providence is in the spoiler below. I just used the stylings of a Phoenix Wright courtroom to make this from Celianna tiles. What do you guys think of it? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Cecillia 652 Posted April 18, 2014 Thanks for the feedback you guys. Tsarmina: No, I wasn't actually. o.o Cecillia: Thanks for that. XD I'll fix it shortly. And well... one final map I have together. >_< I'm feeling pretty confident thanks to the feedback, but one other map i'm nervous about... one of three courtrooms in the Seat of Providence is in the spoiler below. I just used the stylings of a Phoenix Wright courtroom to make this from Celianna tiles. What do you guys think of it? Looks great in my opinion! The only thing that could probably use tweaking is the windows. I'd resposition them so that they are centered on the walls rather than the upper edges of the roof. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
dinhbat3 57 Posted April 23, 2014 Great work so far OmegaZero! The layouts are great and I like the details on the restaurant, once the other maps get those they will definitely look good. I might suggest cutting down on the checker pattern a bit though. It might just be coincidence that all the screens have checkered flooring or a stylistic choice. but on the 2nd and 3rd map, I think they take away from the mapping a bit. I think the smaller checked floors can be a bit overwhelming if they are not broken up a little maybe with a rug in the office building, maybe less stark contrast with all the red and white in the clinic? The patter is a bit distracting on those 2 maps. Keep it up =D ~ Dinhbat Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
The Dragon God 34 Posted May 16, 2014 Still looks awesome!! Keep it up! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
