Tears of Fate - Chapter I

[Eviei 3]

Introduction :
 

After the "Kingdom of Elaria" Prince decided to marry "Eden Empire" Princess  , 

,The Two nations became cooperative and both people became one..

 

until one day the princess in "Elaria" gone missing and was never found.

For this reason "Elarian" Soldiers accused the prince of killing the princess and hiding her body and arrested the prince

into a secret hidden place.

 

After that the King of Eden decided to wage war on Eden and destroyed the beautiful Eden Kingdom.

From then Eden Kingdom was divided into a lot of small Colonies.

 

Story :

 

After Elarian soldier "Sam" was forced to kill his mind controlled best child hood friend in order to complete a mission to save the Kingdom of "Elaria". Another friend of his (this time in Eden) asked him to come to help him in a specific situation that he cannot reveal my message due to security reasons.

Game play :

The game battles plays In TBS Style. Meaning you are allowed to move into specific areas marked in Blue Circles. and you are allowed to move 1 time per turn within those Areas.
 

You can also capture "Monster Enemies" using "Capture Orb" skill

And summon them in battles after they are captured to Aid you.

The game will also contain massive amount of puzzles.

 

 

 

 

 

Characters :
 

Sam :
 

Sam is a soldier in the Elarian army. He quit becoming a warrior when his friend was killed after being possessed by a mysterious creature. Following those events he was invited by his friend to visit him in Eden to help in a dangerous situation.

Credits :

 

Sprites and tile sets by : Mack,Celianna 

Scripts by : Galv,Falcao,Victor,XS

Music by : SEGA,Celtic,Final Fantasy.
 

Edited April 20, 2014 by Eviei

[+ Lazzamore 54]

A few things: While it does add to the atmosphere, the font is a tad hard to read. Maybe you should (if you have one) use a less stylized font.

 

And the 'inside' snapshot (with Lilith talking) is kind of confusing; It looks like they are standing on a wall on the precipice of the abyss. I see there's another staircase up there, but no walls.

Edited April 21, 2014 by Lazzamore

[Eviei 3]

A few things: While it does add to the atmosphere, the font is a tad hard to read. Maybe you should (if you have one) use a less stylized font.

 

And the 'inside' snapshot (with Lilith talking) is kind of confusing; It looks like they are standing on a wall on the precipice of the abyss. I see there's another staircase up there, but no walls.

Makes sense,

I am not expecting large feed back but I would really appreciate the feed back.

 

Its just the topic is not well prepared.

I might release a Demo this week and perhaps I might look into the text.

 

Consider this an Alpha feed back if you don't mind,

let me know what you think so far.

Edited April 21, 2014 by Eviei

[Cecillia 652]

Liking the ambience of the maps, except the font is really really hard to read X.x

[Eviei 3]

Liking the ambience of the maps, except the font is really really hard to read X.x

Thanks, I will change the font then.

It was hard for me to read at first too.

[Tsarmina 2,612]

If you still want an elegant font, I love using Monotype Corsiva. (It should be a default font too for Windows~)

[Eviei 3]

If you still want an elegant font, I love using Monotype Corsiva. (It should be a default font too for Windows~)

Will try that.

Thanks for suggestion.

[+ Retired 274]

Looks interesting but font issues as others have mention

 

Also on the Eden screenshot isn't that a moghunters script?

 

You might also want to be ware that we'll known game music in rpg maker games is frown upon because it's often quite jarring. There is a lot of free community music you should consider investigating.

[Eviei 3]

Thanks for feed back .. Regarding the font I might solve this issue either by providing an option to change the font or change it overall. I am happy to see that you are interested because the story is worth it. Anothrer detail you could know about that Eden people don't like Elarian people and vice versa. The question is how sam an Elarian will live with that in Eden.About the mog script I didn't have time to update topic. About the music it has some Enterbain mudic as well but overall the music choice is great and suitable so don't worry. I will be sure to provide a demo soon.

[Eviei 3]

New game play video :

 

 

 

Please give me feed back.