Critiquing needed for Brother and Sister Faces

[+ MinisterJay 73]

Here are two characters that I am working on.  These were made using Face Maker 3.1.  There are for the game Solum Inquisition.

 

The main character Pharin:

 

 

His sister Freida:

 

[TheoAllen 830]

In anime terms, if two or more people has same bloodline, they usually have same hair color. If they not, one of them is probably foster child. Nah, I personally don't really care about it. Your character faces are fine to me. Carry on ~

[+ MinisterJay 73]

In anime terms, if two or more people has same bloodline, they usually have same hair color. If they not, one of them is probably foster child. Nah, I personally don't really care about it. Your character faces are fine to me. Carry on ~

 

Having fun with messing up the rules of genotype and phenotype.  This ex-science teacher has forgot the fundamentals.  Forgot that they may apply to fantasy too.  Hmmmm.  Just may have inadvertently added to the story line.   Thanks TheoAllen.

[+ Dark Influence 251]

There's always hair dye.

 

What kind of criticism are you looking for exactly?

[+ MinisterJay 73]

There's always hair dye.

 

What kind of criticism are you looking for exactly?

 

Just general critiquing. Why, Randy?  I often delegate artistic categories to others.  I am looking for ways to improve.  I have fun making things from the regular and try to make them different.  Any critiquing that is constructive, positive, neutral, or positive helps me to get better.

[+ Dark Influence 251]

I was just wondering.

 

Well, I'm not a digital artist but the sister's face does exhibit a few masculine traits, however they are fairly easy to ignore and understandable considering you used a generator though.

[+ MinisterJay 73]

I was just wondering.

 

Well, I'm not a digital artist but the sister's face does exhibit a few masculine traits, however they are fairly easy to ignore and understandable considering you used a generator though.

 

Thanks.  Might make the features softer.

[Cadh20000 249]

The only things I noticed were the hair colour TheoAllen mentioned and the lack of definition to her nose's shape. It almost looks like she doesn't have one. I'd suggest just adding a little bit of a line to give the tip a definite shape, I think that would make a huge difference.

Of course, when using a generator you just use the parts it has available.

[+ MinisterJay 73]

The only things I noticed were the hair colour TheoAllen mentioned and the lack of definition to her nose's shape. It almost looks like she doesn't have one. I'd suggest just adding a little bit of a line to give the tip a definite shape, I think that would make a huge difference.

 

Of course, when using a generator you just use the parts it has available.

 

Thanks Cadh.  I could Gimp her nose a little bit.

[Cadh20000 249]

Hope it turns out just the way you want it!

[+ MinisterJay 73]

Thanks.  I am actually having fun with this Face Maker.

[OogieBoogie765 12]

I think they are very good besides the obvious already stated things... her hair , her nose. Overall I think they are wonderful.

[+ Shack_Keeper 30]

It's all been said, good job! just make there features more similar you can usually get away with different color hair if you match up the rest of the features.