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This is a few screenshots from my game I'm working on that I'm trying to get completed in little over a month (now until the end of June). Any feedback, positive or negative on how to improve things are greatly appreciated. The game is short, the world only has about 4 towns so the big vast parts of space are bugging me. 

 

 

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Actually, feel free to just make the world smaller and move the continents together. Considering it's a short game that you're making, it doesn't need to be a sprawling, expansive world. :) If you really want less empty space, dot some more islands. Maybe make a little isle, or some peninsulas. 

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Actually, feel free to just make the world smaller and move the continents together. Considering it's a short game that you're making, it doesn't need to be a sprawling, expansive world. :) If you really want less empty space, dot some more islands. Maybe make a little isle, or some peninsulas. 

Thank you! I'm taking that into consideration and redoing it now. I'll post an update soon (probably on Wednesday :P)

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So I fixed it! I made the world map smaller and in turn the islands a bit smaller. I like how it looks better now!

 

It isn't a big game, it doesn't have any innovative or clever mechanics but it'll be my first COMPLETED game and I think that's what excites me the most. Any feedback again (negative or positive) is appreciated and I'm going to go and get to work on the towns! :D

 

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Island One

 

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Island Two!

 

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Island Three!

 

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And the final island!

 

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Gonna stab a guess here... Do you need an airship to get the volcanic island?  :P

I like them, especially the volcanic. Only issue I find (just opinion) is the emptiness of the ice island, unless of course you're going for major tundra, in which case s'all gravy. 

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On the volcano island, there is sort of the impression that there is a lot of magma everywhere with no clear source for it, maybe try putting in a centralised volcano with the magma clustered round it and emanating away from it?

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