parallax My first parallax maps! (For my zombies game)

[AndresNobody 0]

Hello! I am new in this thing of parallax mapping, but I am very happy with the result. 

I need to add some events and two or three more cars (and delete the militar car maybe) to the city map, but first I want to recolour them. I have to add the lights and the shadows and the maps will be finished (and solve other minor problems) 

It for a zombie game, so the city is abandoned and dirty. 

 

Part of the city: 

 

 

 

The shop, Tisco:

 

 

This map is doing only with the editor. Is the refuge where you start the game. At the begginig its very empty, but you can build new things. 

Sonn I will remake the map in parallax.

 

 

 

Do you like the maps? What I can improve?

 

Thanks for the reviews!

Edited June 6, 2014 by AndresNobody

[seriouscat 347]

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[AndresNobody 0]

Creating your own topic in the Screenshots and Mapping forum requires you to have a minimum of 3 screenshots up for critique. Please add one more screenshot. If you are unable, please post your two screenshots in the Screenshot Critique Thread, but be sure to review the rules of the thread first found on page one. 

 

I forgot the third screenshot, sorry,  but i fixed it  XD 

[+ Brackev 66]

If you want to break up the cleanliness, try adding a little bit of noise to the pics. 

In the the store, the scrapeing patterns in the lower right and below the circular display make little sense.  What is getting moved around that would cause that?

Otherwise, they look good.

Edited June 6, 2014 by Brackev

[+ Myst88 87]

Pretty good. I would add more rubbish and debris though.