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about 30 min ago i used gimp to create a parallax map for my field 1.

i need help putting more stuff in the map because it just looks to plain so please suggest or comment on the map.

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Hey, not bad! It looks much, much better than my first parallax!

 

It's a bit hard to see the ground well enough in the picture, but I think I see flowers in the back. They might be just a bit too "spacey" (for a lack of a better word). Perhaps clustered flowers like the ones in Mack's tilesets might look a bit more natural (the multicolored autotile ones)? Just my humble suggestion!

 

It also might help to use a couple other tree graphics, to create a more realistic feel - or possibly tint some of the trees to be varying shades of green.

 

If you want more oomph, I think it's fair to say that you've got several trees to block the player's path already. I think anything you should add from this point should be below the player - such as tall grass, mushrooms, small twigs (that you can walk on?), different flowers, etc.

 

Hope that helps! :]

Edited by yuyu!

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I really like the more detail texture with the grass.

It's kind of hard to tell but it looks like you have the sand(?) covering the flowers, that is questionable though because I can't tell from this view. :)

 

You can use other more deciduous trees to add more flavour as a forest tends to have more than one type of tree in general. 

You can also add something like grass to where the roots of the trees are to bring it out more to those borders.

And if you like, a little light beams (which are optional but look great for forest maps) can make this more vibrant!

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@yuyu I'll try to add different trees when get back home

@LadyMinerva I already added sun light and a little rain I used snipping tool to take a pic from the gimp because my screenshot script dosent take pic of parallax or the sun

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I'm no good at parallaxing. your map is very good. maybe you should put more flowers, some stumps twigs etc and maybe a small spring?

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