Could someone rate my maps

[bluenakki 3]

I'm new to rpg maker vx cae and i want someone to rate my first mappin atempts. thanks in advance

 

 

I appreciate any help or tip

 

edit:

i've tweaked the interior map a bit, is it any better now?

 

 

Sorry to bother everyone again, could you help me with these maps? (I was without my computer for a time)

 

Don't mind the house I'll change it later

I think it's too empty

This is the snow forest after the curse has been broken and also during the time paradox

 

I didn't had been using ace lately, my HD broke so i have just got back to my game project

thanks in advance for all the help 

Edited December 30, 2014 by bluenakki

[Tsarmina 2,612]

Wow, those are good for your first ones! I think the last interior one is kind of bland, especially that middle upper room with the stairs. I bet you could place a random table or something in there.

[HumanNinja 144]

The snow map is weird bc some trees have snow and others don't. I like the first two maps but like Tsarmina said, the interior map is vanilla.

[Knighterius 502]

I love them all!! Sure the third is a little bland but first time and you're doing this good. I think we can safely say that they all need a little work but they are really well made, considering.

 

Edit: You said rate so here you go.

 

First map: Nice clean use of various tilesets which made for a good outdoors setting a little bland, maybe some chests for future thinking but essentially in this case I found less was more so 9/10 

 

Second map: I loved the colour schemes, once again great use of tilesets, it almost made me feel like I was going into a poisonous forest. I really did enjoy it Good work, I didn't mind that there wasn't snow on some trees so I'd give it a 10/10 for creativity .

 

Third map: Sadly, for this one, I am going to be a little harsh and give it a 5/10 because it was very vanilla and bland. You did, however, did I good job at making it feel homely, I'm just not a fan of the tiles used.

Edited September 29, 2014 by Knighterius

[bluenakki 3]

Thank you all for the advice. I'm horrible at mapping interiors, maybe iI'll let my brother do it

and for the trees, they are supposed to not have snow, in my plot an arcanist enchanted that forest and some trees beca different. they now emanate an aura of some sort that causes sadnes

[magic2345 252]

I say you continue mapping interiors and become awesome at it. Remember, for interiors (especially houses like that one), bigger isn't always better. Bigger means more empty spaces, and it'll become harder for you to fill up the spaces.

 

When you say it like that, the enchanted trees on the second map does have a mystical vibe to it. Nicely done!

 

For the first map, what you need are bigger tree clumps, and maybe a little more elevation. Try spreading some more grass autotiles around the right part to make it feel less empty. Grass autotiles are your friend!

 

Hope it helps!

[Knighterius 502]

Thank you all for the advice. I'm horrible at mapping interiors, maybe iI'll let my brother do it

and for the trees, they are supposed to not have snow, in my plot an arcanist enchanted that forest and some trees beca different. they now emanate an aura of some sort that causes sadnes

Don't worry! I have complete faith in you! They are awesome, honestly. 

 

Edit: Wait nevermind, that's the second floor. Looks good!!! ^~^

Edited September 29, 2014 by Knighterius

[roccstar1oh1 19]

Pretty good for a first attempt, practice makes perfect. I like the use of the interior tiles, just keep trying different things and eventually you will find your own style. I think the size of the house can lose one row of tiles off the top, big usually means empty, other then that things are looking good.