Title screen logo

[Omni Link 18]

Hello Hello, just finished the title screen logo for my project game: Ophelia

 

 

just showing it off

 

Edit: thanks Izu for pointing out the mess up

Edited February 7, 2015 by Omni Link

[Izu. 239]

Well in my general opinion, it looks quite nice. Just a few things that I would personally change.

 

The first thing I noticed was that this little part here looked to be a very gradual gradient that though you can see it up close, it looks like one solid color from a distance.

 

 

 

Also, the stroke that you've applied to the outside of the ring looks to be a little thick, which that's probably just me though. xp

 

 

 

 

I would also apply a quick drop shadow to it.

 

Besides that, I don't really see anything that'd I change with it. ^^

[Omni Link 18]

Well in my general opinion, it looks quite nice. Just a few things that I would personally change.

 

The first thing I noticed was that this little part here looked to be a very gradual gradient that though you can see it up close, it looks like one solid color from a distance.

 

 

 

Also, the stroke that you've applied to the outside of the ring looks to be a little thick, which that's probably just me though. xp

 

 

 

 

I would also apply a quick drop shadow to it.

 

Besides that, I don't really see anything that'd I change with it. ^^

oh derp, it does feel off when i look at it now, after ive had my coffee , thanks for pointing those mistakes out.

[+ dbchest 160]

everyone is a critic man. i think it looks phenomenal. great work.

[Omni Link 18]

everyone is a critic man. i think it looks phenomenal. great work.

haha thanks.

[Cr88tions 7]

That is a really nice logo. I'm in no way a master artist so I wouldn't have spotted those bits...

 

What program do you use and just out of interest, how many layers is that?