_____ 214 Posted February 11, 2015 (edited) I've finished the game title for my game Kid Hop-o Rising Star, what do you guys think? im attaching a different title to this one, a smaller one, I made earlier with added text, and I added two edited versions with your suggestions Edited February 11, 2015 by FLGsRetnuh Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Scoosh 10 Posted February 11, 2015 (edited) I really like it. Looks interesting! The only thing I think is wrong is the red underlined text. The bottom line is off centre and the redtext sticks out too much, the focus should be on the character I think it would be better something like this: same colour yellow text, like star wars.. Just an example. Or maybe the text could curve round the star? Is it a plat-former? xD Edited February 11, 2015 by Scoosh 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
_____ 214 Posted February 11, 2015 (edited) thanks for the feed-back, and no its not a platformer, its an rpg but you do have a jumping ability... I thought your set up was good so I went ahead and made versions with it (look at original post above your post) Edited February 11, 2015 by FLGsRetnuh Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Scoosh 10 Posted February 11, 2015 No prob. Ah that's still cool Yeah definitely looks better that way. You can even read the title just looking at the thumbnails. Not really got much else to add. The only other thing I noticed is the character has some grey alpha outlines which sometimes you can get rid of it by just adjusting contrast I think. Not really very noticeable tho so it's up to you but it's something I know other people will end up mentioning lol 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
