FrozenGold 3 Posted May 29, 2015 (edited) BASIC INFO: edit: 15% (Chapter 1 - Chapter 2) CHARACTERS: MISCELLANEOUS: More Screenshots: Battling 3 Salamanders in a Volcano! Cinematic before Seyah and Inari will enter Sinadale Seyah beggine Inari to join her company. ~ o ~ o ~ o ~ o ~ o ~ o ~ o ~ o ~ o ~ o ~ o ~ o ~ o ~ o ~ o ~ o ~ o ~ o ~ o ~ o ~ o ~ o ~ o ~ o ~ o ~ o ~ o ~ o~ Features: Sideview with great kaduki animation sequence! Spells and Skills epicness! Vast world based on the cultures of the Real World. Great story sequence! Sinadale Entrance.bmp Talking to Seyah.bmp Edited June 14, 2015 by FrozenGold Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
FrozenGold 3 Posted June 4, 2015 Bump! Any comments or suggestions? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cuongeke1 37 Posted June 5, 2015 Seem good, but battle style is so common, graphic is very common too. I like the story but i don't think i'll give it a try Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
FrozenGold 3 Posted June 5, 2015 (edited) I know. I can't find any graphics that suits my liking. Ok Ok it's up to you. Thanks! And i'm no good at pixel art haha! Edited June 5, 2015 by FrozenGold Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rikifive 3,411 Posted June 5, 2015 Seem good, but battle style is so common, graphic is very common too. I like the story but i don't think i'll give it a try He's right... From information and screenshots it looks... well simple. I mean graphics and battle system are (as mentioned above) so common. I'm not telling, that your game is bad or something, but it's not special at all. Random characters isn't a good idea, I'm using MOG's scripts as well and I saw those characters already. I spent many hours editing HUD and other stuff like that, despite the fact that I'm not a good artist. What I want to tell you, that you need to put something from yourself. It's time-consuming, but this is very necessary. Make it special. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
FrozenGold 3 Posted June 5, 2015 I'll note it down what you've just said thanks! 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Knighterius 502 Posted June 5, 2015 Sowwy!! Didn't see this sooner! Looks really good. (don't worry about people who talk about generic battle system, generic characters blah blah blah, who cares? I still watch Hugh Jackman in X-Men and I still watch him in the movie "Australia" too so people get just calm down) anyway! This sounds really good, you could even make a modern Prometheus out of it! Definitely something I'd like to see! Simple is fine for now, it's only in the showroom and early stages. Keep molding your story, if you rush into a battle system and "HD gwaphics" you'll get no where! So really get to know who your characters are, and how the story will progress and then gradually and slowly make your UI more complex, your battles more challenging, and remember to never give up! ^~^ Good luck! Knight 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
+ LadyMinerva 998 Posted June 5, 2015 Seem good, but battle style is so common, graphic is very common too. I like the story but i don't think i'll give it a try He's right... From information and screenshots it looks... well simple. I mean graphics and battle system are (as mentioned above) so common. I'm not telling, that your game is bad or something, but it's not special at all. Random characters isn't a good idea, I'm using MOG's scripts as well and I saw those characters already. I spent many hours editing HUD and other stuff like that, despite the fact that I'm not a good artist. What I want to tell you, that you need to put something from yourself. It's time-consuming, but this is very necessary. Make it special. Now as much I agree, the problem is you guys are telling him that when he just started this project (10%)~ It's like telling a train to go when it has no fuel. People have different starting paces and not everyone follows the same path. Projects start out small and new developers need to build experience and abilities in order to improve. Your comments are not valid at this point and I really don't find them helpful for the developer at this time. Anywho, once the demo version comes out, I'll be willing to try this out and give you my opinions. Knighty has summed up what I pretty much have to say for this project :3 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
+ Takeo212 1,079 Posted June 5, 2015 (edited) Firstly, as much as I really am attracted to your topic, on a large screen with a stupid resolution, I actually struggle to see your images/info as nicely as I want too. Maybe use less images and more text (even fancy text from cooltext.com would be nice) to help with the flashy ness of your presentation? I assume a couple may may have visual problems with your topic too (I love the look, its just hard to see is all). EDIT: The resolution is on my BF's computer, im sure it'll be fine on my own computer, but it was just a possible suggestion It would make updates and such easier to handle too Secondly, even if the overall system/graphics are commonly used, my opinion bases mostly around gameplay and unique features. Even once your game picks up, you can make a few requests now and then to get help with graphics to add a more unique twist to your characters. Make your own design for them, ect. Take your time with that process I look forward to a demo of this and hope you keep updating and keep going :3 Edited June 5, 2015 by Takeo212 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
FrozenGold 3 Posted June 8, 2015 (edited) damn thanks bros! ill definitely make a demo sooner hahaha thanks for the infos! well with the character graphics im retaining it i'm more focused to the story bros so sorry if i cant make that happed HD graphics you want. Edited June 8, 2015 by FrozenGold Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cuongeke1 37 Posted June 8, 2015 Hey! How long does it take for your demo to release? can you make me as a NPC in your game hehe Name: Nightmare Appearance: Short Describe: Cold, Cruel, Never kill without reason, Dark power, Brutal strength, High ATK but some reduce in Evade rate + Def, Absorb Dark Damage, Uses Greatsword Was created for destruction, killing but then he fell in love with a poor farm girl (after he rescured her from bandit... bloody monsters... something really terrible... - therefor she stick with him and then they fell in love) ... Some how in the end the farm girl has been killed by dark forces so NIghtmare put the end for Evil but cost his self life. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rikifive 3,411 Posted June 8, 2015 Well, sorry about that bad stuff I wrote, I didn't mean that you need to change that as soon as possible 'cause that's bad. Don't get me wrong. He asked for suggestions, so I told what could he do to make his game better. I don't know about your skills and stuff like that, so you can ignore some advice if it will bring only problems. I don't need "HD gwaphics" and anything like that. If gameplay is good it doesn't need to have super great graphics at all. damn thanks bros! ill definitely make a demo sooner hahaha thanks for the infos! well with the character graphics im retaining it i'm more focused to the story bros so sorry if i cant make that happed HD graphics you want. That's totally fine. As I said I only suggested. Better to focus on the things in which you are good. I assume you're doing this game only by yourself, so congratulate your patience; I'm sometimes bored to death working on mine Keep going and don't GIVE UP and of course take your time. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
FrozenGold 3 Posted June 8, 2015 (edited) Well, sorry about that bad stuff I wrote, I didn't mean that you need to change that as soon as possible 'cause that's bad. Don't get me wrong. He asked for suggestions, so I told what could he do to make his game better. I don't know about your skills and stuff like that, so you can ignore some advice if it will bring only problems. I don't need "HD gwaphics" and anything like that. If gameplay is good it doesn't need to have super great graphics at all. damn thanks bros! ill definitely make a demo sooner hahaha thanks for the infos! well with the character graphics im retaining it i'm more focused to the story bros so sorry if i cant make that happed HD graphics you want. That's totally fine. As I said I only suggested. Better to focus on the things in which you are good.I assume you're doing this game only by yourself, so congratulate your patience; I'm sometimes bored to death working on mine Keep going and don't GIVE UP and of course take your time. But really i took your suggestion seriously haha still i thank you for that Hey! How long does it take for your demo to release? can you make me as a NPC in your game hehe Name: Nightmare Appearance: Short Describe: Cold, Cruel, Never kill without reason, Dark power, Brutal strength, High ATK but some reduce in Evade rate + Def, Absorb Dark Damage, Uses Greatsword Was created for destruction, killing but then he fell in love with a poor farm girl (after he rescured her from bandit... bloody monsters... something really terrible... - therefor she stick with him and then they fell in love) ... Some how in the end the farm girl has been killed by dark forces so NIghtmare put the end for Evil but cost his self life. bro ill make you a secret character one that is unlockable in game and very strong of course:) Well the demo? I don't know where to end the game for the demo so im still working on it. haha! Edited June 8, 2015 by FrozenGold 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cuongeke1 37 Posted June 9, 2015 (edited) Nice, thank. But shouldn't too strong, i don't like imbalance hehe unique is great enough. I'll give you a skill set for me-actor soon If you don't mind can you give my NPC some stories as well but make it a secret scene. Players can activate the scene only when they visit Nightmare's place (his house..? an old, ruined, abandoned house..) - Oh right, and i want a scene in the forest where Nightmare had saved his beloved before. When you enter that place Nightmare becomes berserk and attacks another actors (he becomes really terribly strong this time, if you lose this battle you lost him from your party forever, but if you win you will get a stronger Nightmare hehe. Well it's a little too much so i can understand if you refuse it Edited June 9, 2015 by cuongeke1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
FrozenGold 3 Posted June 9, 2015 Nice, thank. But shouldn't too strong, i don't like imbalance hehe unique is great enough. I'll give you a skill set for me-actor soon If you don't mind can you give my NPC some stories as well but make it a secret scene. Players can activate the scene only when they visit Nightmare's place (his house..? an old, ruined, abandoned house..) - Oh right, and i want a scene in the forest where Nightmare had saved his beloved before. When you enter that place Nightmare becomes berserk and attacks another actors (he becomes really terribly strong this time, if you lose this battle you lost him from your party forever, but if you win you will get a stronger Nightmare hehe. Well it's a little too much so i can understand if you refuse it Ill note it down bro! i like secret characters in games haha Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
