haofeng93 2 Posted June 2, 2015 (edited) 06/06/2015 UPDATE - A few new screenshots added, along with some refined art for Aria in the Dev Notes! This game is a work in progress, which is in the early stages of development! If you want to cut straight to the good stuff and judge me from there, there are screenshots to see. If you are more interested in learning about the project, and me, go down to the Dev Notes where I've written some random things that you can check out. Sparrowhead and the Lost King, at a glance; Traditional RPG, modern ideas, bright art direction, original monster design, large maps, original characters, original menus, story-driven game... It's just another normal day for quite a normal girl, Skye. When walking through the forest near her home, she stumbles across a sparrow at the bottom of a tree. This sparrow, however, can talk. Before she even has time to think about why this sparrow is talking, it pleads with her to help him regain his memories. Oh, yes. He also conveniently has amnesia. Always happy to help, and perhaps somewhat influenced by the fact that this is a talking sparrow(!), Skye agrees. The sparrow, who takes his place upon the top of Skye's head, suddenly whisks them away to another world, where their journey begins - a journey of discovery and rediscovery, and a journey to help a little sparrow find his way back home. Little does Skye know, this new world is in turmoil. The King has been missing for around 40 years, and with no traces of him to be found, riots, fighting, invasion, and poverty and stricken the land. Although this place might seem fantastical, something sinister lurks just out of sight... Something which threatens the whole world. A vast world awaits Skye, from rolling fields to bleak mountains. This is a Kingdom which at it's centre sits the Royal State of King's Perch. What once was a majestic and affluent place, however, has become a shadow of its former self. The peace of every corner of the vast kingdom is threatened, from the big cities to the smallest of villages. The world is made up of several provinces, each with a distinct characteristics. Provinces are vast maps containing their own species of monsters, and several settlements to visit. Exploration of this huge world will be rewarded. World Map coming soon! (When I get around to producing a lineart version...) Sparrowhead is a more traditional style RPG in that it features a cast of four playable characters, which form the party. This means these four characters can have a greater focus for character development and also allows the player to more easily manage their levelling and general upkeep. Guest characters do appear throughout the story, however the four characters listed here make up the party for the majority of the game! Check the dev notes for some concept artwork for the new character profile art. The artwork used in the profiles below is based on the in-game sprites, and as such, doesn't look so good blown up to these sizes. I will most likely replace these with updated art when I can finish them. Note, this artwork is slightly outdated. The in-game sprite is based off of better artwork, which I've somehow managed to lose... Anyway, I'm not sure, I think her eyes are kind of oddly positioned in this one? Could be me, though. Feel free to give me feedback about this. Confirmed Feature List: Traditional style turn-based RPG gameplay, with a four character party. Well written, engaging plot, filled with twists and turns, and all the things you'd expect from a great RPG story. Expansive MMO style world, filled with large maps to explore. Maps contain numerous settlements, quests, dungeons, and overall have nice map design and realistic geometry. Simple, but charming artwork with a modern art direction - cel-shaded character art, charming monsters, and appealing visual elements make Sparrowhead a pleasure to play. Original monster design - no RTP monsters here! Custom menus, battle graphics, message boxes, title screen, etc. Unique gameplay mechanics for each playable character, such as magic synthesis and blacksmith systems. Possible Features List: Day/Night Cycle, with weather? Could be a possibility however it will need to look good and have an impact on gameplay. CG artwork with in-game gallery. Character schedules. The part you've no doubt all been waiting for... I hope I somehow live up to your expectations! New screenshots at the bottom! This is because a lot of people haven't seen the thread yet so I want to allow to see the screenshots as the game progressed, not in reverse. Dynamic title screen, which plays directly into the opening of the game. The graphics will probably change since I'm a perfectionist and there some things that are slightly out of position to me. The map itself isn't actually finished yet anyway, since I still need to do a final shift-mapping, and sort out the grass and shadows. A brief look at the opening scene, showing off the general feel of the game and the art direction. Sparrow, fog, lighting... Things like that. The menu screen, probably will change some elements, again because I'm a perfectionist. Magic Synthesis screen, which is a fully working system, not just some mock-up. The battle screen. It looks a little nicer when the full four party members are in battle, but it's just as good here I think. Also, showing some of the monster design. Not the most attractive piece of mapping here, but I just feel like I need to make it apparent that I know how to shift-map haha. Also, the weather and lighting changes dynamically as you move through maps. The map itself is from a much larger first area of the game, seen below. Shrunk down a lot, but that's the bottom half of the first game area, showing the scope of the maps. UPDATE - 06/06/2015: Some people told me that they don't think the deep purple colours are very suitable considering the screenshots I uploaded previously were all in dark environments. The game actually has a lot of scenes in the daytime that weren't completed when I took the screenshots. So, here a few taken in mid-afternoon... What do you guys think of the colours? (The cloud overlay continues into battle, which is kind of odd... Not sure if I like this haha) (Aria's debut! Kind of haha. The shadows in this map aren't completed yet, which is why it might look kind of odd) This is where I'll post my random musings, and any other visual stuff that doesn't have a set place. UPDATE: 06/06/2015 Building on the concept art I uploaded a few days ago, I've refined Aria. The entire image is done, however I want to redo the shading, so here is a preview of her face. UPDATE: 03/06/2015 I've done pencil sketches of what will most likely be the character portraits used for promotions and in the status screen... This probably won't replace the in game sprites already in use, because those looks better at smaller sizes, but will no doubt replace the character profile art. They're both still early rough sketches on paper, so expect a few mistakes and some proportion issues. Skye: Aria: 02/03/2015: Thank you for making it this far, and please leave absolutely any thoughts and opinions. Be as harsh as you like with criticism, I'd rather know than go along with something which someone later tells me is absolute trash! Right now, the game is in a very early stage of development where I'm still making everything look how I want it to visually, and implementing all the gameplay systems. As such, the story content isn't implemented yet, expect for the bare minimum to give me some room to test various gameplay mechanics and other stuff. As of now, two out of four of the gameplay systems tied to the characters are done, and the majority of the visual aspects are done. I'll tweak them, no doubt, but the only other visual aspect is the save/load screen, which I've yet to do. The story itself is fully planned, and I know exactly where I'm heading, in that respect. Implementing it, however... That's another story. I feel like it might be useful to briefly introduce myself since I'm rather new to this forum. I'm Connor, or haofeng93, and I've been using RPG Maker for well over ten years now. I've pretty much constantly been tinkering with something on RPG Maker all this time, and this is my first serious project with serious aims. I like to believe I'm pretty competent with RPG Maker, so I hope it shows. I'm a university student myself, majoring in Chinese, so any Chinese members can approach me with any questions if they'd like to haha. That's all I really have to say about myself. Credits: Script Credits (Thank you everyone for all your amazing work); Advanced Select Item -- V.M of D.T Anywhere Texts on Screen -- Theo Allen Galv's Menu Themes Engine -- Galv Galv's Message Background -- Galv Galv's Message Busts -- Galv Khas Awesome Light Effects -- Khas Arcthunder Khas Pathfinder -- Khas Arcthunder Map Screenshot -- Hime MOG - Battle Cursor -- Moghunter MOG - Battle Hud EX -- Moghunter MOG - Battle Motion -- Moghunter MOG - Damage Popup -- Moghunter Skip Title Screen - JV Master Script Victor Engine - Basic Module -- Victor Sant Victor Engine - Fog and Overlay -- Victor Sant Yanfly Engine Ace - Ace Core Engine Yanfly Engine Ace - Ace Message System Yanfly Engine Ace - Event Chase Player Yanfly Engine Ace - Gab Window Yanfly Engine Ace - No Encounter Region The artwork and design was done entirely by me, and me alone, with the exception of the monster design. Those were done by a close friend who will also be credited. I produced the final lineart and sprites for them. I know my artwork isn't exactly the best, so feel free to give me criticism about it! Friends tend to avoid telling you how it honestly looks, so an impartial judge is far better. Edited June 6, 2015 by haofeng93 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cuongeke1 37 Posted June 5, 2015 Nice, haven't read the story just look at some screenshots & it makes me think to dark fairy tales princess & her bird lost in dark forest. COol. Will be a great game no doubt but good graphic is required 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
haofeng93 2 Posted June 6, 2015 Nice, haven't read the story just look at some screenshots & it makes me think to dark fairy tales princess & her bird lost in dark forest. COol. Will be a great game no doubt but good graphic is required Thanks for your feedback! but good graphic is required I'm just wondering, do you mean the graphics currently aren't very good? I'm trying to make the most of the RTP graphics but I understand that a lot of people don't like them. Also, there is an update in the main post with new screenshots and some new art, so feel free to check them out! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
KainLightsworn 63 Posted June 6, 2015 Frankly I don't understand most people's complaints about the RTP. Used cleverly, they can create some beautiful scenes. I, for one, think this game already looks beautiful, and I love the idea of magic synthesis! I like the artwork you have going here, and overall, just like the concept a lot~ I look forward to seeing more updates on this project. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
haofeng93 2 Posted June 6, 2015 Frankly I don't understand most people's complaints about the RTP. Used cleverly, they can create some beautiful scenes. I, for one, think this game already looks beautiful, and I love the idea of magic synthesis! I like the artwork you have going here, and overall, just like the concept a lot~ I look forward to seeing more updates on this project. Thanks so much for your support! It means a lot to hear that people like the concept and the direction I'm going in. It definitely motivates me to release something that will live up to everyone's expectations, so thanks again! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
+ HavvaH 3 Posted June 7, 2015 Looks good! love the world map! 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
haofeng93 2 Posted June 7, 2015 Looks good! love the world map! Thanks a lot for your comment, it means a lot! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites