KainLightsworn 63 Posted June 4, 2015 Hey guys! So, I'm not entirely sure this is the right place to post this, but I couldn't see any one particular thread that worked perfectly for this particular item. This is the cutscene which serves as the opening of my game. The artwork I've used in creating it is all stuff I've drawn, the music is my own composition, and it is being read by Aldrius, the voice actor for the game's main protagonist, Eachann. I'd like your feedback on how well this serves as a hook for the game, as well as the art and music. I've only recently gotten my art to a point where I feel at all comfortable about sharing it online, and I know there are a lot of improvements still to be made. I've done a redux of this scene already, correcting a few things that were major issues from the scene below- the more egregious armor proportion failures, completely re-doing the banners, etc. But I'd like to know if I'm completely off-base in having this as the first thing which greets the player and plunges them into the world. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Maradon 1 Posted June 5, 2015 It looks good to me. The video was very entertaining. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
