+ HavvaH 3 Posted June 7, 2015 (edited) Vlue Maynara, Khas, Nicke, Nerdigaming, venka http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=447913066 Edited June 13, 2015 by Kîra Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
+ HavvaH 3 Posted June 12, 2015 Leave me some comments guys please! What do you like or don't? Questions maybe? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
KainLightsworn 63 Posted June 13, 2015 Hey, just dropping in to give my two cents on the project: I love the way the maps look in the screenshots. Very, very pretty! If there is any critique I can offer, it's to make sure you proofread your writing before you post the topic. There's a few typos here and there, and it can break an otherwise excellent presentation. For example, your prelude is lacking in punctuation that would make it much more readable. Additionally, you've typo'd/misspelled 'legs' in the phrase 'as fast as her legs can carry her'. I'd be careful of the point of view/tense shifts in the writing as well. But aside from those little nitpicks, I'd say you've a pretty cool concept on your hands here. I like the idea of playing as a vampire. Would there be any implementation of a 'thirst' system in this game? It'd seem to me an interesting way to add depth to the gameplay, as well as give a sense of the 'urge' described in the title. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
+ HavvaH 3 Posted June 13, 2015 (edited) Hey, just dropping in to give my two cents on the project: I love the way the maps look in the screenshots. Very, very pretty! If there is any critique I can offer, it's to make sure you proofread your writing before you post the topic. There's a few typos here and there, and it can break an otherwise excellent presentation. For example, your prelude is lacking in punctuation that would make it much more readable. Additionally, you've typo'd/misspelled 'legs' in the phrase 'as fast as her legs can carry her'. I'd be careful of the point of view/tense shifts in the writing as well. But aside from those little nitpicks, I'd say you've a pretty cool concept on your hands here. I like the idea of playing as a vampire. Would there be any implementation of a 'thirst' system in this game? It'd seem to me an interesting way to add depth to the gameplay, as well as give a sense of the 'urge' described in the title. Hey tanx for youre two cents! Yea my native language is'nt english and I try my very best XD I'll put in some more effort to weed those mistakes out^^ And yea on the screenshots you can see the "blood/thirst'' meter to the top right corner. So you got to drink blood , aquired in diffrent ways to clench youre thirst. Walking in the daylight for example wil burn you up! I've taken the fact that you play as a vampire very much under consideration and plan to make it as realistic as possible^^ Grtz! Edited June 13, 2015 by Kîra Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Evaaan 6 Posted June 17, 2015 Why dont you attack the leader and become the leader of the village xd Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
+ HavvaH 3 Posted June 17, 2015 Why dont you attack the leader and become the leader of the village xd Now that would be a boring story wouldn't it? Srry but it goes much deeper then that... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
