Pedrovin 22 Posted June 20, 2015 Hey there, this is an old game of mine from 2012-2014, who I decided to translate from my native language to english, and these are some cutscenes! Some feedback would be nice, since I have no idea if I'll continue translating it, but if people want to I will, the RPG Maker community over here IS a lot bigger than the one my country has, after all. It's not really a serious game... like... at all so it's filled with sillyness and stuff. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Capt_Elfimis 55 Posted August 7, 2015 The cutscenes themselves seem like they are relatively well thought out and have a good ebb and flow to them. As far as the context of the game itself goes I know you mentioned that it is not serious at all but the sarcasm is so overly implied that it is too much in the players face and causes one to become disinterested since the dialogue has no variation, it's just one quip and punchline after the other. Keep the sarcastic banter and humor but I would tune it down a bit personally. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites