JayNyne 6 Posted July 18, 2015 (edited) So basically my game uses an abs. Specific monster sprites are hard to find so I made some.I'm a complete beginner and have about negative zero (it's not even a number) idea what I'm doing when it comes to making sprites. So you know, feedback is something that'd be cool. If you like em' tell me why so I can continue doing that kind of stuff. If you don't tell me that too and how to fix that stuff so I can bring out some next level sprites.Down below are 100% of the sprites I've ever made, that's right just those 4. Right now I'm focusing on elementals, so I want to make at least 1 enemy for the 8 main elements in my game before moving on to something else. NEW STUFF Minor Darkness Elemental Btw thanks for the feedback, never be afraid to be harsh if you need to be. Like I said, I'm a beginner and I can't draw for anything but I'm looking to improve as well as provide sprites for myself and for others. Also, as I get better I'll be able to pump better sprites much faster. But yeah, thanks again.Anywho, enjoy the sprites!Or not. Also here's ma' YouTube channel for videos on my game, it's super bare right now though and I've only got one video. https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCTnHbRqy4ijxi38_PPl7hZAFire Elementals Minor Fire Elemental Ice Elementals Minor Ice Elemental Elite Minor Ice Elemental Elite Minor Ice Elemental. V2 Earth Elementals Minor Earth Elemental Lightning Elementals Minor Lightning Elemental *NEW*Darkness Elementals *NEW*Minor Darkness Elemental Working On: Gransys Orwell (a guy in my game) and Falhawk Griffin ( another guy) Edited August 22, 2015 by JayNyne 6 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Culai 51 Posted July 31, 2015 I think they're pretty decent. I especially like the fire one. I think they need some work, mostly the earth one, but other than that they are pretty cool! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
JayNyne 6 Posted August 1, 2015 I think they're pretty decent. I especially like the fire one. I think they need some work, mostly the earth one, but other than that they are pretty cool! Cool. I've been figuring out how to shade stuff better so soon I'll probably update the older ones. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
xoferew 261 Posted August 2, 2015 I feel like the fire and earth ones both have personality. The fire one especially seems sassy. Ice seems more like a flat decoration; I'm not sensing icy rage or freezing doom from it yet. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
JayNyne 6 Posted August 3, 2015 (edited) I feel like the fire and earth ones both have personality. The fire one especially seems sassy. Ice seems more like a flat decoration; I'm not sensing icy rage or freezing doom from it yet. The ice one is being remade as I send this and a brand new one is coming soon! Edit I want to improve these as well as add new ones. I looked for tons of pictures of Ice and I noticed that some went a lot darker so errr... is this any better? Edited August 4, 2015 by JayNyne Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
xoferew 261 Posted August 4, 2015 Yes. It says, "I am calm but my claws are at the ready." (Similar to my cat. ) What's the red part for? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
JayNyne 6 Posted August 4, 2015 Yes. It says, "I am calm but my claws are at the ready." (Similar to my cat. ) What's the red part for? All the elemental have one red eye in the middle, that's just something I want to put on all of them. Btw, I was thinking about the colours and just decided to add a second version. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
xoferew 261 Posted August 4, 2015 Have you considered making the eye blink by changing it to a flat red line in the middle column? Might be cool and also make it clearer that it's an eye. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
JayNyne 6 Posted August 5, 2015 (edited) Have you considered making the eye blink by changing it to a flat red line in the middle column? Might be cool and also make it clearer that it's an eye. I'll try it out on the sprite I'm making now Edit: It looked too much like a mouth opening and closing, though that isn't to say that I won't considering using that at some point. Edited August 5, 2015 by JayNyne Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Culai 51 Posted August 5, 2015 Oh, I like the Elite Ice Ver 2 the best. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
JayNyne 6 Posted August 6, 2015 (edited) Oh, I like the Elite Ice Ver 2 the best. Thanks I hope I can provide even better ones in the future. And here's a new one: Also, I could make a second version Minor Ice Elemental if you want. Edited August 7, 2015 by JayNyne Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Culai 51 Posted August 8, 2015 I like that lighting one a lot and I just saw that one video you have on you youtube channel, and I think instead of resizing the sprites you should just make bigger ones. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
JayNyne 6 Posted August 12, 2015 I like that lighting one a lot and I just saw that one video you have on you youtube channel, and I think instead of resizing the sprites you should just make bigger ones. I don't really know how big I want them in the end so I just made them the "standard" size. Sorry for getting back so late, I've been pretty busy but I'll gonna start on two new sprites and continue fixing up the earth one. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Culai 51 Posted August 12, 2015 Oh okay, that's fine. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
JayNyne 6 Posted August 22, 2015 So... it's been a minute... sorry about that. Thar ye go! Minor Darkness Elemental Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
xoferew 261 Posted August 22, 2015 Ooh, like a psychotic starfish! Cool! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
JayNyne 6 Posted August 23, 2015 Ooh, like a psychotic starfish! Cool! Haven't thought about it in that way but I like it! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
