Some of my main cast

[Iliketea 13]

I have finished some first desings of some of the main characters and I'd like some input on them

I hope you like them *^^*

 

The main character

I think her name will be Anya. See is around 14 or so years old and was raised by her older brother. She is the heroine of my game. Haveing been raised by her brother alone, she is a bit of a tomboy. Rather stubborn, a little bit naive, open minded, chaotic. Loves her brother and wants to be like him. Strong sense of moral, eventhrough that moral isnt exectly the norm. "If it goes wrong, it goes wrong. If not, that's great!"- mentality.  Is she main-charcter-ish enough?

 

The rest

This ones Name is Kimberly. She is 21-23 years old. She is a gambler and likes alcohol. A lot. A cheerful and carefree person, but get really pissed if people try to tell her how to live or are mean to her friends. Can be rather serious and hardworking if she wants, Has a unique view on many things, Her weapons of choice are small battle axes, but she also has a thing for explosions and carrys some bombs around. 

 

 

His Name is Jeff, he is 15-16 years old. Me seems a bit shy, but he actually just doesnt like to talk to other people. If you do get him to talk to you, he only gives short answers. He doesnt like to be in places with alot of people. Is a bit lazy, but that doesnt affect his work, he just wants to finsh it quick, so you leave him alone soon. He really likes chocolate, so if you want something from him, be sure to bring some.

Once he has warmed up to you, he can be really sweet and loyal. There are actually some topics he cant stop talking about, like chocolate, torturing, interrogation and cats.

He fights with knives and daggers, stereotypical thief/assasine character.

 

Im not sure about his name, I like Samus or Ari. Not sure yet. He is, or rather was, a prince of a southern kingdom, one of many. He was supposed to become king after his father died, because he seemed easy to manipulate, given his carefree and naive manner, but the ministers quickly discovered that he was acually very quick- witted, cunning and smart and only acted like that to have a chance for the throne. His father was quite the thyrant and Samus/Ari wanted to change his kingdom for the better. But after the ministers discovered his true nature, they decided to get rid of him. He fights with a spear, but is capable of using some magic. 

 

 

Please tell me what you think of them and tell me what you think I could do better.

Thank you

[EpicFILE 200]

Their design and personality matches pretty well.

Anya is the first heroine-wielding-oversized-sword I've ever seen. xD

I think she'll be a good character. 

 

My favorite here is Kimberly.

I think she has the best design, and her play style seems interesting. 

[Tsarmina 2,612]

I like Kimberly too! I think you made her design very thoughtfully and she seems well-rounded and multi-faceted.

[Zielach 142]

They look simple but detailed, and that's very cool. Good job on that.