Zielach 142 Posted October 30, 2015 Hey, first of all, I'll be posting here less frequently because most of the gallery critique's main page has my name on it, and that can be considered as spam, and second, I would like your opinion on these: Plant Thunder Fire WaterSorry for posting that much, but I really appreciate your opinion and want to get better at this, hope it doesn't annoy you. I'm not going to post anything for a few days, then post much more together. 2 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
+ Takeo212 1,079 Posted October 30, 2015 The lines look a little tidier in these ones I really like how they look though. My favorites are Fire and Water. Fire looks badass, and Water has that ninja rush that is cool. I suggest once you get alot of battlers made up (since you said they were for public use too) that you can make packs. I see your doing elementals now, so maybe an elemental pack once you've made enough, so everyone can download that instead of singley. Of course, you make a txt doc stating your ToC but, this is only a suggestion I really like your shading on the metallic bodies though~ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rikifive 3,411 Posted October 31, 2015 That's a really uncommon style. (= I like the 'elemental' idea. The only thinigie, that caught my attention is the fire one - I mean the red lines beneath him. It kinda looks like random lines made in paint. =P But the rest really looks great. ^^ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Zielach 142 Posted October 31, 2015 The lines look a little tidier in these ones I really like how they look though. My favorites are Fire and Water. Fire looks badass, and Water has that ninja rush that is cool. I suggest once you get alot of battlers made up (since you said they were for public use too) that you can make packs. I see your doing elementals now, so maybe an elemental pack once you've made enough, so everyone can download that instead of singley. Of course, you make a txt doc stating your ToC but, this is only a suggestion I really like your shading on the metallic bodies though~ Thanks for your response! I'm glad you like it! But, what does ToC mean? That's a really uncommon style. (= I like the 'elemental' idea. The only thinigie, that caught my attention is the fire one - I mean the red lines beneath him. It kinda looks like random lines made in paint. =P But the rest really looks great. ^^ I did the fire's lines like these on purpose, it gives it a more strange look, and that's pretty good xD Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
+ Takeo212 1,079 Posted October 31, 2015 ToC means Terms or Conditions (I probably abbreviated this wrong, so whoops). Might be TaC (Terms and Conditions) Either way, it means you'd write out your rules and when these can be used (commercial, non-commercial, only in RPGM that stuff). It just means you put rules to using your stuff so people can't claim or use them without your permission. I'm just disappointed there's no wind yet ;P Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
xoferew 261 Posted October 31, 2015 Looking cool! I agree with Riki, though, the lines at the bottom kind of stand out. On water too. It may be exactly what you were going for but if people THINK it's a lack of skill... Could you use those same lines but with some gradations of translucency so they aren't so abrupt? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
EpicFILE 200 Posted October 31, 2015 I love your unusual style! The plant and the fire warriors are my favorite. Now I'm curious about the heroes of the game... It'd be nice to see them in the next update. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Zielach 142 Posted October 31, 2015 ToC means Terms or Conditions (I probably abbreviated this wrong, so whoops). Might be TaC (Terms and Conditions) Either way, it means you'd write out your rules and when these can be used (commercial, non-commercial, only in RPGM that stuff). It just means you put rules to using your stuff so people can't claim or use them without your permission. I'm just disappointed there's no wind yet ;P I don't think I need it, all my work is free to use, thanks anyways. Looking cool! I agree with Riki, though, the lines at the bottom kind of stand out. On water too. It may be exactly what you were going for but if people THINK it's a lack of skill... Could you use those same lines but with some gradations of translucency so they aren't so abrupt? Thanks, I think you're right, I'll just change it. I love your unusual style! The plant and the fire warriors are my favorite. Now I'm curious about the heroes of the game... It'd be nice to see them in the next update. Thanks! I use the Tankentai (not sure if it's spell right) Battle System, so I'm not gonna need a battler for the character, anyways I guess I'll need a face for it. I'll upload it too. My personal favorite is plant too, I did it with a very cool pose. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites