Valtiel 0 Posted February 21, 2016 I was wondering if any would help me critique my design for this game. Its basically your run of the mill horror game. Ghosts haunting a mansion and the character has a connection to it somehow. Story The Story resolves around Jack. An orphan who is revisiting the mansion where his entire family of six were killed. He begins to see corpse of the mansion's servants stowed away in cabinets and lockers. Their ghosts will attack him. He slowly begins to realize who the killer is. Tell me what you think. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites