tiffycat13 0 Posted April 5, 2016 So I decided to make my own character busts/full characters and I wanted some feedback on them. These are the main heroines for my game. There names are Roxana, Faye, Briar, Rue. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Daskana 8 Posted April 5, 2016 I am by no means an artist so take whatever I say with a grain of salt =) They are very nice full body characters, are you going to smooth out the color or is that a style for the game? Also something about Faye's hair around her chin bothers me but I cant exactly pinpoint it. Aside from those two areas I think they are awesome. Lets see more of your art! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
+ Chaosian 617 Posted April 5, 2016 (edited) Strictly from an artistic standpoint there's room for improvement. The aforementioned color smoothing is good advice, I think some heavier, cleaner lines would go a long way to help that too. There's minor things, such as some places where there could be more shading (at risk of sounding vulgar their chest says C cup, but their shadows say ironing board). This is purely a stylistic choice, but I think their eyes are also far too big. Seems ovely-cartoony with respect to the remainder of their bodies and I dunno, just looks off and vaugely inhuman. Edited April 5, 2016 by Chaosian Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kmany 5 Posted April 6, 2016 I would say that those are good bases. The poses look good. I mean, with all art, they could even work like this, depending on the overall art style of your game. Otherwise I would clear up the lines a bit, and add some more shading and highlights. I do not think the eyes are too big, unless you are looking for realism. I would probably thicken the top eyelash tho. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hayato 63 Posted April 27, 2016 I would say that those are good bases. The poses look good. I mean, with all art, they could even work like this, depending on the overall art style of your game. Otherwise I would clear up the lines a bit, and add some more shading and highlights. I do not think the eyes are too big, unless you are looking for realism. I would probably thicken the top eyelash tho. I solemnly agree.. My only opinion is that I find the shape of their faces a bit weird, might as well if you'd fix that.. Like Kmany said, they are a pretty good bases.. so there is more room to enhance those beauties Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
