The world is a lie: Artwork (charas, battlers, NPC,screens)

[BlueFlame 2]

Hello there!
Well this is my first project and I will post the artwork here because I really need some feedback ( had it displayed on DA but nobody seems to care about it and that makes me a little sad)

 

Anyway I will start with the battlers and the title screen, just a few things before:

1. I do not know how to draw properly so my drawing skills are very low.

2. I use photoshop and ilustrator.

3. Some of the text is in spanish, do not worry, I'll translate it.

 

With everything said and done, lets begin!

Title says: The world is a lie.

And now the Battlers (AKA Bosses, btw they are all static)

 

Small battlers:

 

Edited June 19, 2016 by BlueFlame

[Zielach 142]

That looks scary xD
The third one is pretty good, even though the first one, for example, looks very polygonal. Maybe you should improve it or smooth it, but if it's like that on purpose, I think it's kind of strange but good xD

I don't know much about that style, I'm a pixel artist xD

P.D: Yo también soy español xD

[Thaletos 96]

Wow, those battlers are kinda creepy,... I like them haha.

 

The style seems a bit weird, but it's not that bad (the third and the fourth are quite good), and it adds a bit of uniqueness. However, about the first battler, I fell the head doesn't fit well with the rest of the body.

 

I'm sure it will get better with practice, so keep going. I'd like to see the results.

 

 

 

P.D: Yo también soy español xD

Pues parece que llevamos 3 de 3 XD

 

 

[+ Takeo212 1,079]

The first battlers arms annoy me. The triangle shape looks pretty sharp and edgy, and the fact they are attached by the tiniest pixel doesn't be nice.

I suggest either a thicker connection to the body or maybe disconnect them all together and have floaty arms xD

 

Overall, they are pretty unique. They have a blend of 3D modeling with some 2D editing done to them. I couldn't give an exact opinion though since I don't know the game graphics (tiles, battleback, ect.) but stand alone, they give an unsettling vibe - which is what I assume you were going for.

 

EDIT

For future feedback, I understand why you added a watermark, but I don't recommend such a strong one, especially with such a strong blue colour.

I can hardly get a good look at anything since your watermark covers up alot of detail and blend sinto the dark details making them near impossible to critique on.

 

ps; battler boss one's face reminds me of the "BEN DROWNED" creepypasta. Such a dead expression haha.

Edited June 16, 2016 by Takeo212

[Rezanta 373]

The fourth boss is something that reminds me of Dark Souls... am I really insane at this point? Is the world truly a lie? O.O

 

*Ahem* I agree about the water mark, but I do want to state that the style fits for those unsettling vibes. (Although the thumbnail made me think the first boss was a Pokemon and the second a varies based creature.)

Edited June 16, 2016 by Rezanta

[BlueFlame 2]

Allright then I will take some notes, including the fact that there are three spanish speakign persons (Hola amigos! igual variaré entre ingles y español XD)

 

It seems that I tackled a problem with the first battler AKA the first boss, indeed it was the first one that I made and I was thinking about a cross between a kokeshi doll (the head) and a butterfly with sharp-like claws made from scissors and cloth, I will fix it.

Now, I will fix the watermark  too, it is, indeed very difficult to get a glimpse of the battler with it.

 

And last but not least, I was looking for a disturbing, creepy or unsettling vibe, that is because in my game, the small battlers are rather cute until something happens and everything goes down the drain fast. I will upload more details soon in the showroom section.

 

Thanks a lot guys!

[BlueFlame 2]

Bump.

Edited all battlers and new battler design and no watermark.