Some Screenshots from my game, Feedback wanted~

[Iliketea 13]

Hi everyone,

I would like to show you some screenshots and maps from my game and I hope you can give me some feedback to them♪

 

Rosenberg, the first town:

 

 

 

 

 

 

Some rooms:

 

 

 

 

 

Two of my mountain maps:

 

 

 

 

 

The first dungeon:

 

 

 

 

 

 

I hope you like them!

[_____ 214]

The Map quality is Amazing! I've rarely seen better. The character models for when text is displayed could use some work though.

[RayChan 8]

great work on those maps i expecially love the First Dungeon!

[+ Takeo212 1,079]

Oooooh, I remember seeing a certain Echo playing the demo to this~ ;P

 

I really love that town screenshot. The variety of different houses and placement is really nice and gives a nice bit of style and shape to the town~

I think my own nit pick is, within the houses, some items are to big. An example is the rope on top of a wardrobe. It's huge. In a real situation, if I had a rope that big, it'd be in a box on ground level, not high up where it'd prob crush me if it every fell.

The layouts and clutter are really nice though, just some items are a little to big on comparison to the characters ratio.

 

I really like the artwork too

Edited June 16, 2016 by Takeo212

[Saneterre 8]

Your maps are really pretty and well done.

I don't like your big town because it really is too big (who has time to explore all that ?) but that's just a personal taste. Your houses are beautiful nevertheless.

 

Good job !

[2BitsLP 21]

Wow that mountain map is inspirational o.o Good job~

[Iliketea 13]

The Map quality is Amazing! I've rarely seen better. The character models for when text is displayed could use some work though.

 

Thank you ^^ Yeah, The Busts need some work. The newest ones are better ^^

 

great work on those maps i expecially love the First Dungeon!

 

Thank you :3 It was a lot of work XD

 

Oooooh, I remember seeing a certain Echo playing the demo to this~ ;P

 

I really love that town screenshot. The variety of different houses and placement is really nice and gives a nice bit of style and shape to the town~

I think my own nit pick is, within the houses, some items are to big. An example is the rope on top of a wardrobe. It's huge. In a real situation, if I had a rope that big, it'd be in a box on ground level, not high up where it'd prob crush me if it every fell.

The layouts and clutter are really nice though, just some items are a little to big on comparison to the characters ratio.

 

I really like the artwork too

Yeah, That was really cool I never noticed that with the too big stuff but now that you say it o0 

 

 

Your maps are really pretty and well done.

I don't like your big town because it really is too big (who has time to explore all that ?) but that's just a personal taste. Your houses are beautiful nevertheless.

 

Good job !

Thank you ^^ Too big is a first But you spend quite some time in the first city so you have lots of time to explore

 

Wow that mountain map is inspirational o.o Good job~

 

Thank you Glad you like it!

[Katsudoom 6]

Do I need to open my mouth?...... Yes I do. You're maps is already awesome... Keep up the good work *thumbs up*

[Tsarmina 2,612]

I love your maps There's one thing that bothers me a lot though, and it's in the first map--the difference between tree sizes is pretty mind-boggling. The small trees closest to the houses look like bushes compared to the big trees (in fact, I thought they were oversized bushes at first). Especially when you place the really big trees close to the small trees, it doesn't look very harmonious. I know that dealing with tree sizes is a real pain in the maker XD so I can't blame you for anything. Consistency is a huge key in bringing your maps together, so I would suggest replacing the giant trees with lots of smaller trees (maybe make the surrounding trees a teensy bit larger, but not drastically so) so the difference isn't so shocking. The same goes for the mountain maps with trees, though those aren't as drastic.

 

Keep up the good work!! Your mapping skills are off the charts ^u^

[+ JuJu 73]

Awesome maps! 

[amerk 1,122]

Me loves the mountain path; me finds it one of the best mountain paths I've seen used with the VX/Ace maker.

 

Overall, it's all really good, though the perfection in the city - not a crack in any of the cobblestones or walls, not a single weed that I could see, interiors that look like they all came out of a showcase - doesn't seem quite so natural. I'd add some chaos to the mapping, by adding a few cracks in some of the more weathered dwellings and maybe some areas where the flooring has not aged well.