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Story

A mysterious figure named "Tivalaeth" sends a faulty Spellbook to Twilight, claiming it was Princess Celestia,knowing Twilight will be naive enough to believe that,she opens it and cast a spell,a spell that sucks all of Ponyville and surrounding area's in a strange new world,the party slowly start to realize its a book,mean while,there seems to be trouble brewing between the nations of the "Book world".


Characters
Twilight sparkle
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This is Twilight Sparkle,a young unicorn who was born in canterlot,she was sent to Ponyville

to learn about friendship,she is the element of magic,meaning she is more magically powerful
then most unicorns,though she isn't very adept in offensive magic,she still has some fighting skill.
She is kind,friendly but can be "naggy" and naive,despite her intelligence.


Pinkie pie
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This is Pinkie pie,she is...well...Pinkie pie,she's happy,fun,hyper and always has a song to sing

she has a bad habit of not seeing whats right in-front of her over herself,but still
very opening cares about her friends and can't seem to live with out them,without
going insane,in battle she serves as a bard,singing and dancing to support the
party and distracting enemies.


Rainbow dash
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This is Rainbow dash,she is reckless,strong and quick,she has the most

experiance at fighting,therefor she has a fairly high Attack stat,Power stat and
speed stat,she can hit from two to five time,her 'magic" skills are based off weather
ranging from tornadoes to thunder storms and everything in-between.


Applejack
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This is Applejack,she is honest,athletic and and competivie,she often competes
with Rainbow dash on who is more athletic,only to figure out they where mostly
even,in battle she is the "warrior/tank" character with massive attack,great speed
and good defense,though she lacks in good AP and D-SPC,she packs on powerful buck.


Fluttershy
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This is Fluttershy,she is...well...shy,extremely kind and gentle,but extremely

easly rattled,despite this,she will stick up for her friends if they're in danger,she
has a very close bond with Rainbow dash,who stuck up for her when she was a 
filly,in battle she is very weak,but can heal,support the party and summon her animal friends

Rarity
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This is Rarity,she is vain and has a bad habit of forcing her issues/task on

her friends,despite this,she is the element of generosity,and thus is very caring
to her friends and loved ones,in battle she acts as a "Druid" of sorts,having the 
prowess of being offensive,but a much better healer and has a slue of support.


Spike
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This is Spike,he is Twilights number one assistant,as well as her best friend,he isn't the best fighter

but has very tough scales,meaning he can take for DMG then most characters,he can also breath fire
and do low level magic,he is very kind,loyal and smart,but can very sarcastic and vain,this may be a effect
of his massive crush on Rarity.

 

Shining armor WIP

Zecora WIP

Dr.Whooves WIP

Trixie

And more...WIP

 

Screenshots

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FEATURES

12 Planned chapters with a large "Post game"

A "Dreamscape" system,where you take really weird and special quest during sleep to get very rare gear and loot(Optintal)

A short Interquel story that takes place during the plot staring Shining armor and Cadance 

A large world map that covers 4 in-game nations

And more

 

 

Credit-

 

 

Yanfly-Scripting
Tsuk-Scripting
Galv-Scripting
Greenclover-Minotaur sprite
Mr.bubble-Scripting
Dshou/Dsky-Pony sprites
Trent shucks-Ideas
Mateous mendacona-Writing and ideas
Mithran-Text fix
"Equinox"-Ideas
DP3-Scripting
The vizzed community(More so Crazy Li then anyone)-Writing

Kayden-Mapping

Enterbrain-Engine

GIMP-Image editing

LazyV-Equestrian knights logo(Not my sig,I made that)

 

 

Edited by Sgt Twilight Sparkle

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The game in itself seems well thought out and well done. I will honestly admit I probably will not play it, simply due to the excessive amount of... well.... ponies. lol. I'm sure a lot of others will, though!

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I don't get this pony stuff... seen it a lot on the internet lately, but seriously? Ponies? Come on kids... Maybe I'm just too old for that. :D

 

But let's talk about your game and not my personal preferences.

The concept of a 'cute' game is kinda fresh, so I approve of that and it could fill a hole in the mostly fantasy-some horror-maybe sci-fi landscape of RPG Maker games. The characters fit the concept pretty good, did you think off them yourself or is this based on some TV series or something I don't know about? I mean the characteristics, not the pictures, I've seen those before.

The charsets for the ponies look cute as well, but I'm afraid they don't really match the RTP tilesets. And the RTP tilesets don't really match the overall 'cute' style ofthe game. (also the battlebacks) But I guess it's hard to find tiles for that kind of stuff. Something you should definetly change is the mini map on screen, it looks really out of place just hovering around, being dark blue and all. Either try to visually implement it into the screen, like in some kind of HUD or get rid of it completely, I'd suggest.

 

I wish you all the best for your project, but there probably is still a lot of work to do.

Have fun

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Yeah,I wasn't sure if i shoulda posted this on here or just a MLP forum since i assumed this woulden't have large amount of people who enjoy the show

 

Something you should definetly change is the mini map on screen, it looks really out of place

I agree it looks pretty out of place and iirc theirs a guide somewhere to make a evented minimap so i'll try that out instead

 

, but I'm afraid they don't really match the RTP tilesets.

That was one thing I'm quite disapointed about to,the tilesets do not match the shows art style enough

Edited by Sgt Derpy hooves

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Major updates!

-MLP font

-More music

-First dungeon made

-Mostly done with scripts

-Final battle engine

-New menu design

 

Minor updates!

-A few grammatical fixes

-Slightly diffrent title screen

 

Screenies!

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EDIT

Darn it didn't notice that I didn't put a icon for delete and load,just added the script,sorry

Edited by Sgt Derpy hooves

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Well, considering as I'm a fan of FiM, I'd be happy to help- definitely in writing, at the very least. Looks like an interesting concept- though I will admit, unless you give me exactly what you want going on, I might end up turning it into something chaotic and, well, horror-driven.

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Well, considering as I'm a fan of FiM, I'd be happy to help- definitely in writing, at the very least. Looks like an interesting concept- though I will admit, unless you give me exactly what you want going on, I might end up turning it into something chaotic and, well, horror-driven.

If you want to help me you're welcomed to ^^ the only help I have is a spriter named dshou and my friends for idea's I'll PM you the jest of the story,I changed it but I've made up my mind on this one

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I think this game needs a bit more colourful tiles.

Gonna work on stuff like later,though tile sets will take such a long time to make It may come last. Facesets are probably gonna be the next graphic fix next to all the mugshots which may take around two days all in all

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Minor updates

-Every main character now has a mugshot,though the side ponies and recruits still need them

-Shining armor also has a mugshot but its rather crappy

 

Stuff I'm working on

-Book check out system(Only one book at a time,more time you have a book more expensive it is)

-Better face sets

-MLP style battle backs

 

RECRUIT!

-I would love to have a mapper,my mapping skills are medicore as hell

 

Screen shots!

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If you have the tilesets and a small idea of what you want the map to look like I can make one for you rather easily. Only things I would need is Size of the Map (? X ?), the resource set you want it to be made with, and if you want any specific layout for it. PM if you'd want my assistance.

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I would post screenshots but my computer with RMVXA is being repaired

-New alphabet and language for the ancient tribes

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-Working on the language 

 

 

 

Ponese
Fute Ponis/Ni Equine

éuhha-Time
Koe-Its

Koi-It

Kos-Is
for'é-Simple
Boke'uh'mororé-Unicorn(One with magic)

Siz'uh'wu-Pegasus(It that flies)
Mau-mau -Wolf (!~Mau Mau~!)-Timber wolf (!~mau~!?)-Grey wolf
Xin-mau -Anger,mad(If used on somepony else)
Koko-Female
Koku-Male
Kuko-Unkown gender,it,thing
ko-like -there ko-uko-They're,They are
!~Xooik~!-Anger,mad,malice(Used on self)
Boh mende-Argu(On somepony else)
Boh-uko -(On self)
Soy-Of
Budhau-Male(Slang)*
Budhaf-Female(Slang)*
Gha-Anger,malice,hateful(Slang)*
Fufu-Fight
!~Fuafau~!-Fight with several opponets,several allies,royal rumble*
Fofufo-Fight with a strong beast <>
FahFah-Taunt in fight*
Faav-Fight(Fight taunt)(Slang)*
Farze-War
Haus-Peace <>
Hausic-Peacful<>
Hauso-uha -Peaceful time<>
Fuke-Hair
Fumare-Mane
Cule-Cow
Culok-Cow,racist(Slang)*
?~Ul~?-What?
?~Ule~?-Who?
?~Uha~?-How?
Ule-What
Ule-Who
Uha-How
Forse-When
Dar-Hero*
Daros-Hero<>
Dari-Save(As in "I was saved!")
Dario-Savior
Dod-Save(As in "I saved my progress")
Duz-Happy(Slang)*
Du/Do-Adventurer
Fute-Neo*
Furq-New*
Ni-New<>
No-Neo
Equine-Equine (Used as ponese <>)
Qeunian-Equestria <>
Ponis-Ponese
Fuuh-No
Fuua-Yes
Foul-Bird
Fulk-Forghen
Divi-Heavon,Paradise*
Dovo-Hell,torture,sad*
Duvu-Uknown land
Duv-Idiot,stupid*
Divivian-Equine -Alicorn
Divivian-Divun-Deirt
Divune-God,Deity,Informal alicorn
Nor-North Blend )
Nero-South Blend )
Nenu-East Blend )
Nua-West Blend )
Nur-Compas
Num-Map
Dore-Gear
Aqus-Water
Pyho-Fire
Nutete-Nature
Pisaq-Poison
Trike-Eletric
Triken-Storm
Gu-Liquid
Gan-Solid
Gaha-Gas
Shorn-Horn
Wogo-Pegasus
Maha-Mother
Moho-Father
Muhu-Parent
Mahao-Kid(as in "My kid")
Mahu-Kid(General)
Magaga-Beast(Often used in "Strong beast")
Mumb-Food
Mubu-Meal
Muba-Breakfast
Mabu-Lunch
Maab-Dinner
Qa-Qa -Weapon
Quu-Armor
Quh-Cloths
Mehen-Quest
Mehe-aqu -Traveling over water
Sianna-Jihad*
Su-Magic
Skieh-Weather
Sko-Sky
Yiz-Magical land
Yoz-Drained land,Bare land,wasteland
Foi-Forest
Opo-Sight
Opono-Eyes
Kono-Inner
Kon-opona -Mind
Fahka-Destruction*
Fahk-Burn
Fahz-Flood
Gus-uhu -Blood*
Papaun-Land mass,Island
Aquaun-Island*
Sohopaun-Chain(As in Island chain)
Juu-Money(Alot)*
Auo-Money(Cents)*
Julu-Rich(As in "Rich with money")
Juku-Poor(As in "Poor with money")
Furu-Pout,whine*
Con-Theif
Conana-Evil warrior
Cores-Power
Poq-Weak
Ey-Sky
Eyen-Space
Eyaa-Clouds
Eyaten-Ocean
Tenna-Earth,ground,terra
Coole-Light
Cola-Dark
Coli-Shadow
Coi-Wreck,Devistate
Cokkoo-moko -Strong male
Coco-moko -Strong female
Lau-Unhealthy
Lao-Normal
Lak-Healthy
Lah-Very healthy
Majes-Leader
Cy-Hoof
Yooy-Cuite mark
Jono-Filly
Jano-Foal
Jajo-Mare
Yao-Very disturbed female
Lagao-Stalion
Bish-Rude person
Bich-Kind person
Rongo-Write Ronga-Write Rongic-Written Rong-Letters
Hermik-Travler
Rog-Civilion,normal,normal pony
Tirek-Tyrant
Gau-Goose
Mani-Theif
Cosa-Moon
Rosa-Sun
Fosa-Star
Gosa-Comet
!~UnuMosa~! Astroid
Summu-Hunger
Tirra-Die
Tenn-Death
Tok-Near death
Kor-A
Kora-An
Koranic-And
Yoso-Creepy
Moro-Awesome*
Yoho'maro-Creep
Rou-You
Roua-Your
Huuh-Insult your strengh
Tee-Walk
Tega-Gallop
Cux-Clop,pervert*
Magga-Large,big
Fod-Quiet
Fog-Loud
Zo-Very weird
Xoco-Well
Hahak-Very
Olanok-Nation,country
Fooge-Mountian
Kakoko-Canterlot
Ponesy-Ponyville
Qaw-Nerd*
Mahk-Snow
Maah-Lava
Vuvu-Rain
Cest-Sun
Lunkan-Moon
Solha-Stars









<>=Ponese only
*Archaic,Ponyvillian and cultish




 

-Getting new faces soon

-Got a really awesome Ponyville map :3

 

Also is there anyway to change the name of the thread? 

Edited by Sgt Derpy hooves

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For some reason, this whole thing reminds me of Magical Starsign. Best of luck to you.

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For some reason, this whole thing reminds me of Magical Starsign. Best of luck to you.

Funny you mention that,one of my failed projects was actually loosely inspired by the first magical starsign game(The one on gba)

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this really cute. :D.

for the tileset not matching problem i guess you need to use parallax map instead. it will fits more i think.

if you can't make parallax map... i suggest you to learn how to do it :D.

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I admit this looks interesting, you obviously put a lot of work in it. My roomate flipped out when he saw it, he's a huge brony so he asked me to post. I noticed that your writing and grammar a bit behind, I know you are trying to get the feel for the characters, but it kind of felt...weak to be honest. With as well done as everything else is, I hope you polish it up before release.

 

I'm a fairly decent writer and would be glad to look over whatever you need when I have time and give pointers or whatever. One last thing I feel I should mention. Your battlers, they are amazing, but the enemies waaaay outsize the foes, and especially with other ponies, it just looks off. I would recommend making the enemies more balanced in size. With a side view battle system you should have a bit more freedom with how you make your enemy sprites.

 

Best of luck to you.

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this really cute. :D.

for the tileset not matching problem i guess you need to use parallax map instead. it will fits more i think.

if you can't make parallax map... i suggest you to learn how to do it :D.

I have new tilesets that fit more,but I may need to paralax map some stuff

 

 

 

Where do you get your pony sprites? and if its okay could I use them too?

I got them from a guy named DShou,just remember to get permission from him 

http://dshou.deviantart.com/gallery/41016666

I admit this looks interesting, you obviously put a lot of work in it. My roomate flipped out when he saw it, he's a huge brony so he asked me to post. I noticed that your writing and grammar a bit behind, I know you are trying to get the feel for the characters, but it kind of felt...weak to be honest. With as well done as everything else is, I hope you polish it up before release.

 

I'm a fairly decent writer and would be glad to look over whatever you need when I have time and give pointers or whatever. One last thing I feel I should mention. Your battlers, they are amazing, but the enemies waaaay outsize the foes, and especially with other ponies, it just looks off. I would recommend making the enemies more balanced in size. With a side view battle system you should have a bit more freedom with how you make your enemy sprites.

 

Best of luck to you.

I know my writing is a bit off,but I've been getting better at it,and for the battlers,I'm still experimenting with sizes and stuff

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I'm gonna completely rewrite the original post soon and add bios on all the new characters

The Doctor/Doctor whooves

Derpy hooves

Iron will

 

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And maybe add any credits you might have missed? :)

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from the screenshot... yanfly definitely need to be credited :D for the battle system and status menu and message system.

while galv for the main menu :D.

Edited by estriole

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I'm loving the Battle backs and the mushroom battlers!

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